"You know I wouldn't think any less of you if you were gay, you know that right Spike?" Twilight jeered with a smirk as she walked past him which caused him to freeze in place for a time.
He however spun himself around with a deep blush and glared the the Alicorn whom was smirking at him. "Th-That's not it at all!" Spike protested.
At first, I thought it would be kind of neat to give Sweetie Belle a kind of multi-personalty complex but the more I wrote it, the more it felt as if I was trying to create a plot excuse to drive her in the directions I have planned so I abandoned the concept before I got very far, this is the result before I abandoned the idea completely.
I'm sure I've said this many times in the past but I can't say it enough, I'm sorry that my story updates can take so long to come out and the hiatus between chapter updates can be so long at times.
I feel though that I owe you an explanation as to why this can happen and so often.
At first I wanted to solve the situation between the cmc as quickly as possible and allow AB and Scootaloo come into the supporting roles they began as but that would be shortcutting a lot of character development plus story. So I opted to remove this from the latest chapter.
"So, you gonna tell us what Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon have you or not?" Applebloom asked in a slightly annoyed tone.
Since the showing of the latest CMC episode, i've actully been debating on whether or not i should cancel this fic since I wrote them as the obvious antagonists of this story and this episode has blown that profile to hell and back.
I've been mulling it over for the last 3 days or so and I've finally come to the conclusion that I'm going to continue the fic but the plot will be taking a new direction.
Me: Awesome episode and this means that DT is finally shed of her bully nature which means I can write her as something more than a-
My Fanfic: Not so fast! Diamond Tiara is still a bitch in this story and she must remain that way!
Me:But she's likeable now! How can I write a character whose character that way when she suddenly was given so much depth and is genuinely likeable now?
My Fanfic: How the hell should I know? You're the writer, not me.
Me:
I find myself struggling with this fic alot and part of the reason why is that I am dealing with pure slice of life set-up here and that's always been a weak-spot for me in my writing. Anyways, this scene was removed because i didn't want Sweetie Belle's secret to revealed to anypony else at the present time.
My thoughts for this scene was to give this fic a serious tone but after some thought, I don't want it to take this direction as it would be depressing as fuck. 
"But I'm not a colt!" Sweetie Belle nearly shrieked at the Alicorn.
Upon hearing this, Twilight sighed aloud. "I guess we'll be adding therapy to the list of things we need to cover." Twilight remarked aloud dismally.
I had thought about giving Silver Spoon a sympathetic character in this story but it felt out of place in my story's setup. Especially with me already establishing her as "A villain" of this fic. Anyways, here's the deleted scene:
"Are you in heat or something?!" Sweetie Belle blurted out without meaning to with a mildly scared yet curious face.
Hearing this caused Sweetie Belle's thoughts to drift back to earlier today when she was forced to ask Scootaloo to give her a blowjob in order to get rid of her very first erection. "You're telling me…" She remarked aloud followed by a sigh.
Meanwhile at the hall of justice...
"We must rid the world of these perverted writers and their clopfics!" Superman exclaimed valiantly.
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