I'm not going to lie, this is going to be my last blog for anything until Nyx and the Sunset's chapter 02 rewrite has been completed.
important blog in relation to this here.. Below is the original first chapter of Nyx and the Sunset, for those of you who want to compare it to the newer version. I will be linking this in the authors notes of the rewrite chapter so it can be reached easily. Happy comparing! And thank you to MixMassBasher for suggesting I do this, and for contributing to
As of today, I have released the chapter 01 rewrite of Nyx and the Sunset. It is a premature release as the re-edits haven't been done. This is my fault and I do apologize to Word Worthy for this. While it's no excuse, my impatience grew to a head, I am normally patient with my editor.
So here are the changes:
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Shorter starting paragraph.
Less detail in Sunsets morning routine.
Addition of a competition between Sunset and Rainbow.
I'm going to cut to the chase here. Since I started work on chapter seven, I've started to realize that Nyx and the Sunset is in dire need of repair. I know a great many of you enjoy this story but I for one loath Nyx and the Sunset, and I was once highly enthusiastic for it. Chapter Seven, with what I've written for it already, has shown me that I haven't made any progression in my writing in the third person style since I started this story back in May 2015, and even before that my style was
So after five hours of thinking of a title, I envisioned chapter seven of Nyx and the Sunset. YAY! 
Right?
I'm personally excited for this chapter in particular, the title is ominous, and the chapter itself marks the end of the first act of the story, we're entering act two of the story. This is where everything you thought about the story changes. 
This doesn't meany anything yet! Hold yer ponies let me explain.
This blog, of course, concerns Nyx and the Sunset, by far my most popular story in terms of interest and vocal urges to continue, as opposed to its likes. I love the story as much as the next reader but I have two Nyx stories I got to put out, one of them being a first for the Past Sins side-fics and the other being a fic I've been meaning to do for years (and it's a sequel to Tears in the Snow), I need to do those before I get back to Nyx and the Sunset, trust me these other fics are worth
To you Nyx and the Sunset readers anticipating the sixth chapter. I am happy to inform you that it is finished. The writing phase is finished, and now the chapter waits quietly for Word Worthy to get around to it. I'm in no mind to rush him, or force him. He will get to it when he can.
Alrighty, now no pictures this time. I'm going to make this blog short as it's only to inform readers of my intentions.
Alright, I'm trying to lessen my blogs, when I hit sixty blogs, I'll stop being frequent.
Now, a recent comment on Nyx and the Sunset has me a little worried about how many of you will think of what Nyx's character will be like, and how the story will progress. I have no ill feelings toward the commenter, it's not a bad comment. I don't address bad comments.
Chapter five! Why you do this to meh?! 
Okay so chapter five of Nyx and the Sunset is kicking my butt till it's redder then the apples on Applejacks ass, and yes, I'm aware I used two versions of the word butt. I've been watching too much ILoveKimPossibleAlot so please excuse my attempts at being funny. Point is chapter five is taking a while, it's not writers block, I know what I want to write, but I can't write it in a way that doesn't sound as cringe worthy as chapter one.
Since I started Nyx and the Sunset, I have been watching E.g: Rainbow Rocks for hours and hours just to get the characters right, to have them sound and act like themselves, Nyx is based on Pen Stroke's Nyx, but with elements of how I write her added in there. I don't write Nyx as accurately as probably some writers but I write her well enough. Sunset Shimmer, Maud Pie (for another story) and Pinkie Pie are really difficult for me to write, I run the risk of making Sunset too whiny, Maud more
Well for those of you who are wondering where the next chapter of Nyx and the Sunset is, I'm afraid you'll be waiting until I finish my one shot sequel to Izanagi's; Maud and the Mountain. Izanagi is away for a few months training to serve as airman of the U.S Airforce, (I am not U.S so I have no idea if I said that the right way), but he has given me permission to
Wow... never have I had so much fun keeping secrets to myself. Usually by this point I'd go about telling everyone what happens, but with Nyx and the Sunset and the comments I get make it all the more juicy, I'm eager to see the reactions when I start revealing the secrets in the story. I intend Nyx and the Sunset to be long and interesting, with new questions being put forward but no answers given (yet ). This is why I'm so excited to work on this story, as it already has
After a long time of on and off work, Nyx and the Sunset is finally posted after only a day's delay due to some things Meester suggested I fix up (which is in the authors notes). The story is about Nyx if she was found by Sunset Shimmer in the Equestria Girls world, put all of your predictions aside, Nyx is interesting in this. While chapter two and three are closely related to chapter one and two of Past Sins, the rest of the story is solely its own and will only reference events from Pen
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