KOTD Update · 7:50am Apr 10th, 2018
Progress on the next chapter is going well, but I'm having a hard time finding just the right music to help me write. I need something that pairs well with telling a sad story.
Progress on the next chapter is going well, but I'm having a hard time finding just the right music to help me write. I need something that pairs well with telling a sad story.
The combat in chapter 35 was...well there were a few minor changes to make. This one was less on combat and more on consequences though.
Didn't change much in chapter 36. A few typos, changed some wording is all.
This chapter is kicking my ass. I'm so close to being done with it. It tells another part of a very familiar story in the MLP universe but from a different perspective. I didn't realize until I got to it, that there are a lot of questions I have. I'm filling them in, coming up with how I imagined things played out and why. I REALLY don't want to rewatch the episodes since I've seen them enough. All in all though, this chapter should be fun! Thanks again for being fans! Chapter should be ready
Hiya, lovely students!
Welcome to Equestrian History 101! I’m your teacher, Prof. Naimat, and today, we’re going to learn about the Tree of Harmony! Let’s begin.
So, in light of the latest episode, The Mean Six, a couple things come to mind.
Not much to fix here except once again I being way too many sentences with "I did this". I spruced up some descriptions and completely erased entire sentences that were just...kind of awkward. It's nice rereading everything. I knew how it all looked in my head but it doesn't always come across that way, but this is how we learn isn't it? The size of this chapter kept me from editing it for quite some time. So I took tonight and made a thousand words worth of progress here and there and took
Just finished my edits for chapter 5. Added in an extra scene and changed around some wording. I'm starting to notice fewer and fewer mistakes. This chapter didn't have as many past-tense mistakes as usual.
I told myself I'd do three chapters tonight, but the very next chapter was a longer one. For the most part, there was just some clarification and formatting issues. As usual, I found any reason I could to cut down on the "I did this" and "I did that"s.
Last two days my insomnia has been ruining everything. I'll get tired, sleep for a rough four hours, with waking up every 30 minutes for no reason. Then I'll need to get up and do something because life doesn't stop for me, then not sleep until next time while being drained all day. I'm trying to work my second delivery job, but I've seen so tired that driving is risky.
Me before work "I'm gonna work on the next chapter of KOTD!"
Me during work *Edits an old chapter or starts to*
Next day
Me before work "I'm gonna edit an old chapter!"
Me at work *Works on next chapter
Next next day
Me before work "I'm just gonna do some writing!"
Me at work *Cleans up notes*
MAKE UP YOUR MIND BRAIN!
It's done! Finally! I really pushed my writing limits on this chapter! I was describing things with words that are...normally purely visual and auditory. It's new ground for me and I hope it flows well. I'm absolutely exhausted and disappointed it took me so long to get it out. That being said, it was fun and I hope you all enjoy it! Thanks again for your patience! Gonna do some more editing on a few older chapters now, so it will be nice taking a small break from new content.
-DC
New chapter's done. Will be posting it tomorrow around 5 as usual. Thank you all so much for your patience! After I post this, I'm gonna spend some time doing some more editing on KOTD.
Don't worry, still working on it. I'm just having issues describing the dancing. I'm waiting for a few prereaders to get back to me on whether it makes sense or not. I've never done this before and trying to explain what someone is doing without being repetitive is a nightmare. Thanks again for your patience!
There wasn't much to edit honestly. I found some better words to use and some awesomer descriptions. This is definitely a chapter that gets me pumped and I don't know why I put off editing it for so long.
Yeah, Ring's Tuesdays and my Wednesdays are both fucked. You'll survive two extra wait days.
We've got another segment of "The Catch" in the bag. Good work, those of you who managed to escape alive.
But Ah did it!
Ah sat down, after working on mah Halloween cosplay, and finished proofreading, editing, and getting all the bits situated to finally submit the new story.
Thankfully, Ah'm awesome and proven worthy of Auto-Approval, so more than likely it'll be ready to read within the hour, maybe less.
Definitely will be up by the morning, for sure...barring any unexpected chaos.
So I've had a lot of stuff go down recently. My roommates and I are putting up a friend who's fleeing an abusive relationship and it's ...well a bit taxing. since she doesn't have a car. I'm working on the next chapter, but I've hit a snag, mostly due to having no idea how to "write" music. Like how do I describe an entire song, even if it's just drums? Well anyways, next chapter might be a bit late. Thanks for your patience!
I thought it would take me longer to edit this, being 6k words long, but it was rather easy. No major edits. A few clumsy worded sentences here and there. Found like...one typo. Otherwise besides the repeated uses of "I did this" and "I did that" I'm rather happy with this chapter.
So after dealing with a lot of financial crap, work was like "Go take a huge ass vacation."
Chapter 39