KOTD Chapter 30...and 31 · 9:02am Oct 10th, 2016
So chapter 30 has ended up being so long, I'm going to break it up into two chapters. I'll post chapter 30 in a few days, then wait a week before posting chapter 31 when it's ready.
So chapter 30 has ended up being so long, I'm going to break it up into two chapters. I'll post chapter 30 in a few days, then wait a week before posting chapter 31 when it's ready.
I know I need to be working on the last half of chapter 32 but I took a small break and finally fixed a small issue that has been bugging me: the short description. So far, here are the two top contenders and I'd like to ask everyone who's familiar with the story to give me their feedback WITHOUT SPOILERS PLEASE. Those of you unfamiliar with the story, please tell me which one would make you the most likely to check out the story. I may combine them when finished.
Son of a bitch, this chapter is on the edge of being done but so help me God crap keeps popping up. Like last three days I have slept like crap. Just can't think straight long enough to finish off the chapter.
I've been dividing my time between sprucing up previous chapters and writing the next one. It's going well so far, but man getting my brain to focus is hard. Also I keep getting ideas for scenes for future chapters. My gdoc of the story looks as disorganized as my room.
Initially I was just going to put the second part of what was supposed to be chapter 30, but I gotta be honest it's probably going to be another two chapters. So expected chapters 31 and 32 sooner than usual.
Yes! Yes! *Rolls around on floor hugging story* Chapter 30 is turning out so well! There's so much deliciousness in here! My brain is just cranking stuff out!
Gonna post it around 5pm mountain time so keep an eye out!
So writing this novel that's going to be about 120 pages when I'm done with it.
The first 19 pages are up. Due to my writing style, I have a boat load of content, with only a few bridges connecting them, so I'll post complete sections first.
Yeah, I know it's way overdue, but I've had a massive writing spree for the prequel called One Woman Army that's all about Lucretia. Don't worry, chapte 33 is almost done but I wanna get my ideas out as soon as they come. Thanks for being patient!
So I'm done with the next chapter, but I don't wanna release it until I'm done rewriting chapters 1 and 2. Basically it's occurred to me that those chapters need some work, especially since they're the first thing new readers will go through. I have a lot of experience moving a plot forward, but if I stop to think about it, I'm still new when to drop the background/setting information. Chapter 1 is a bit of a mess and breaks up combat in favor of a brief history lesson. I'm giving it a pretty
Ever hit one o those points where everything you write just reads bland? Maybe it's just my mood, but everything I seem to write sounds awkward. Trying to finish the next chapter of KOTD, and I swear everything just sounds so weird. Hopefully it's just me.
So I'm not sure what to do here. I have the next chapter ready to go and for the first time in forever, I'm ahead on chapters. Do I release it now to make up for how late the last chapter as, or use the extra time to keep working?
What does everypony think?
So for those of you new to the story, I'd like to give you some lowdown to the future of the KOTD universe. Currently, book 1 is almost done...and by almost done, I mean I keep thinking of new, awesome stuff to add and my storyboard is a complete disaster and is more of a guideline at this point.
I meant this to be longer, but due to writing conditions, I think I'm just going to cut it at a good place. I'm sorry this took so long, I meant to make it better, but the weather keeps causing issues that make it difficult to keep writing and I'm tired of waiting to post this chapter.
Posting it today or tomorrow. Got some stuff I gotta have proofread first before I post it. Thank you all so much for your patience! I know this has been super late and with all my crap going on, this has been eating at me for so long! I'm so glad it's basically done! Thank you all so much for waiting, it means the world to me!
For those of you up to date currently, please let me know what you think of the current predicament! Also please be courteous to your other readers and mark your posts with spoiler!
I hated doing this, but this chapter was a bit long, so I decided to just cut it at 3500 words. I'm alright with longer chapters, but in my experience a long chapter that's mostly combat can get taxing on the reader.
So out of curiosity, I've had a lot of upvotes lately (a lot for me that is ) and out of curiosity, if you've upvoted it recently, how did you hear about the story?
I can't believe it, I'm almost done with chapter 33. God this is turning out amazing!
While my volume of writing hasn't gone up yet, I find myself with this strange urge to put more details into my scenes. I feel like I've neglected to describe Raiden's surroundings in combat and it honestly really helps the mood i want to portray.