KOTD update: opinions needed · 8:30am Oct 29th, 2016
I know I need to be working on the last half of chapter 32 but I took a small break and finally fixed a small issue that has been bugging me: the short description. So far, here are the two top contenders and I'd like to ask everyone who's familiar with the story to give me their feedback WITHOUT SPOILERS PLEASE. Those of you unfamiliar with the story, please tell me which one would make you the most likely to check out the story. I may combine them when finished.
#1. Dear Luna, I’m forever sorry about the war my nation has brought to your home. I’m sorry for the blood that has been shed and for the unspeakable monsters we brought with us. The last of my people will go extinct before we allow your kingdom to fall.
#2. They were sent from hell. We couldn't stop them, so we tried to escape them. That was our first mistake. We may already be damned, but my people will go extinct before we allow Equestria to be slaughtered like our world.
#3. They were summoned from hell. We couldn't stop them, so we tried to escape them. They followed us, and now we may be even more powerless as we try to defend a culture that doesn't fight.
