A self-insert, ponified human in Equestria tale. Gender identity is a huge theme. I have it rated T, but I want it as close to E as it possibly can. For the most part, I'm aiming for a meandering, dialogue heavy slice-of-life, but there are some moments of action already. A Tail of Two Ponies is written in first person, switching between two characters. The plot revolves around two friends; one of whom is happy to be a pony, and the other... not so much.

I primarily am looking for someone to check for grammar, and to make sure that things simply make sense. I'm trying to play around with tense during action scenes and character thoughts. For now, I'd like an editor to look over what I've already published, which can be found here: A Tail of Two Ponies (And yes, the misspelling there is intentional). After that, if the editor(s) is interested, I may provide the link to the google doc, and said editor may have more influence over the story as a whole.

Thank you!