Hey, everyone. I have been reading fanfics on fimfiction for quite a while now and wanted to try writing my own. This is supposed to be a crossover between One Piece and Equestria girls/MLP.
However, since I have never written a fanfic before means I have no experience, I thought opening this this thread could help me to find someone who could help me by giving feedback about the way I am writing the story and the characters, if the pacing and the paragraphs are okay, and/or if my grammer is okay (since english isn't my first language). If you have One Piece knowledge, it could be helpful as well.

If you want to help me and/or need more information feel free to contact me privatly.