I am in need of help editing the structure (beginning, middle, end and how it synches) with some proofreading along with it. I just got back into writing so I might be rusty, but so far a friend liked it so .

The length of the story is exactly 1k words and is going to stay 1k words.

The story is about Lyra and Bon Bon (Sweetie Drops) having a break out as a fugitive variant and a Time Variance Authority hunter as they argue about what to do about the greatest power in the universe.

I pressed enter too soon, stay tuned for more info!
(fixed, press refresh if it seems too short)

Now uploaded to FiMfiction.