Sooo, I need help with a little oneshot that I want to post and I have some errors with the dialogues and with some grammatical rules. Also I will be pleased if they can work with me in other future projects because I have some other ideas in mind. English is not the idiom that i better handling so I have some problems at writing it , just I want someone to help me with the mistakes I made and a few suggestion if they want. A partner would be cool. And i would be grateful for it.

The specific story I'm talking about it is not NSFW just a little comedy and drama. Its is a oneshot with Anon (a gay one to be specific) and his interaction with Discord

Length?: 2115

Title Name: Discord invites Anon out (romantically)

Synopsis:
Discord walks into Anon's house and starts proposing to him on a date... in his own way of course.

Things take a little unexpected turn
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Yeah, I know a little too short but is straight to the point, I think.

The password: nosoul24

Link: Discord on his mission...

I have another idea from a NSFW (not with Discord) oneshot but I'm not sure if write it or not.

Anyone interested contact me for PM (via personal chat of fimfiction) please or if you can by my Discord too:Axelmos#0584.
I will answer you as fast as possible.
Thanks for your attention and have a great day.

Would you like some help still and are you still writing stories?