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I am looking for an editor for a story that I'm currently writing the first chapter of. It's called On Broken Wings and is an alternate universe where ponies made ships like what you see in the game Elite Dangerous.

The premise of the story is that the Main Character gets his ship destroyed, but survives the crash due to his ship's A.I. pushing him into the fighter he had in the hangar of his ship and launching the fighter away from the ship. Due to this, he's left marooned on a planet and has to find a way to leave the solar system he's in before he gets found by what he thinks are hostile aliens.

This story will focus on him finding his way to what he thinks is an abandoned mega ship (basically a space station that has engines, and a way to travel faster than light), and once he gets there he'll find 'abandoned' damaged ships. He'll fix one of them to where the ship's A.I. activates, and the two of them will go about fixing up the rest of the ship to make it able to leave the system.

How long do you plan on making it

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