Hello. I'm looking for an editor for a new Star Wars Displaced project that I'm working on, entitled "More Machine Than Man."my new Star Wars Displaced story, dubbed "More Machine Than Man." The star of the show is Darth Starkiller. In case you don't know who that is, that'd be this guy:

In this story, which will hopefully expand into a full on series, Starkiller's alignment is "Dark Jedi," which is a term I've come to understand as an anti-hero Jedi who uses Dark Side powers for good or something like that. Also, I've decided to have it set in a bizzaro version of the Sombra-Verse/Crystal Wars timeline. Here's how things play out in terms of the Mane 6. Fighting for Equestria is Rainbow Dash/Achroma Burst (who I plan on shipping with Starkiller), Applejack, and Pinkie Pie. Oh and Maud Pie and a few others, of course. Meanwhile serving Sombra is Twilight Sparkle (she's also dating Sombra), Fluttershy, and Rarity.

Also, another idea I had was that some other Sith Lords show up, sent by the very entity that turned my guy into Darth Starkiller, and ally themselves with King Sombra in an attempt to take Starkiller down. Oh, and here's the best part: the following are among the Sith Starkiller will have to fight:

Darth Revan(need to do research into him)

The Dark Apprentice from The Force Unleashed 2 (be interesting to see how Darth Starkiller holds up against one of the most dangerous of adversaries: himself)

Luke Skywalker (in the The Force Unleashed Hoth DLC, which I have for my laptop, Darth Starkiller manages to do what the Emperor failed to do in the canon timeline, and turn Luke to the Dark Side. Matter of fact, in the timeline Darth Starkiller exists in, Luke actually becomes Starkiller's apprentice. So, once again, the last time these two met, Luke was but the learner, now he is the master. Need a good Sith name for him, though. Any ideas?)

And, of course... DARTH VADER!!!

Also, the ponies, changelings, griffons, etc are humanized to the point where they look like normal people, but still have certain aspects of their normal forms. For example, a pegasus would still have brightly colored feathered wing attached to her back.

Now, what I need an editor for is because I'm not very good at writing action sequences. I can see it play out in my mind, but I have trouble actually putting in the story.

Thank you for your consideration.

5780958 Do you have a plot synopsis? First chapter layout? Character sheet? Stance on crossovers? These are all things that would be good to know.

Also, just so you know Sith don't need to be evil or "Dark Jedi". Canonically, there is literally nothing that states a Sith can't be good, so you don't need any real excuses for that.