Description: A oneshot about three Royal Guards trying to evade and survive the changeling invasion of Canterlot. Focuses on character development, a bit of world building, and combat. Nothing particularly grandiose, but it's my first fic, so I'm starting small.
Help needed: Mostly, I'm looking for ideas to make this better and a general opinion on the piece (likes/dislikes). The mechanics (spelling, grammar) should mostly be in order, but there are probably a few mistakes I've missed.
Other information: Mostly, this focuses on character interaction, but there's also a fair amount of fighting too, so if some minor gore and/or fight scenes aren't your thing, you probably want to pass on this.
Title: Tunnel Rats
Tags: Slice of Life
Description: A oneshot about three Royal Guards trying to evade and survive the changeling invasion of Canterlot. Focuses on character development, a bit of world building, and combat. Nothing particularly grandiose, but it's my first fic, so I'm starting small.
Help needed: Mostly, I'm looking for ideas to make this better and a general opinion on the piece (likes/dislikes). The mechanics (spelling, grammar) should mostly be in order, but there are probably a few mistakes I've missed.
Other information: Mostly, this focuses on character interaction, but there's also a fair amount of fighting too, so if some minor gore and/or fight scenes aren't your thing, you probably want to pass on this.
Communication: PMs on fimfiction are fine.