Fallout: Equestria 2
[Gore, Dark, Adventure, Sex]

10 years set after the original, Dusty, an older stallion, is shot in the head and left with little memory. As he tries to uncover his past, new threats from his past threaten the future of Equestria.

I'm looking for people who would be interested in helping me with this project. It has been a long time since I have had interest in writing and thus, lost much of my mojo. I believe writing this can very well help me, but alas I need help with editing and proof-reading. Here are my rough draft's of the introduction and prologue to see if you would be on board with this project.

Introduction
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZbZluYTcOiL88Aqs0ekxg6Qk7TpLdIaLgf-AaVSzqqQ/edit

Prologue
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1QOAxiatPZvFEKCvdBhJWXiCsp1vmnw45uzYcGHlU5jg/edit

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6717086
Okay just read the intro it's short and sweet but I gotta bring two points up so that they don't cause trouble later for you.

1. Raiders aren't a dying breed they start re-emerging in the epilogue, which is set 10 years later, of the original. They were thought to be wiped out but calamity finds traces that an attack on a outpost or something was done by raiders.

And secondly be careful with how you set this out don't forget the site staff don't allow "ponifications" of things so you should plan out how you plan to differ from NV.

But beyond that it's pretty good so far.