Posting for a friend who lost access to his account

Title: Nephilim in Equestria (working title)
Tags: Human/AU/Random
Rating: Teen (for language)
General Summary/Description: A deaf and mute Nephilim rather violently ends up in Equestria. Problems arise when he can't communicate with the ponies.
What type of help are you looking for?: Mostly a proofreader/pre-reader, editors welcome.
Information the reviewer needs in order to review your work: I'm not really sure what you'd need.
Specific things you want the reviewer to focus on (optional): How well it flows, grammar, word structure (had a discussion with someone over whether using "rippling" for muscles that weren't being flexed was correct).
Other important information: He's not working on this very regularly, but he is trying.
Form of communication you want to use with your reviewer: Skype, fimfiction PM, or G-Drive (he has it stored there)