here is my first try for a fanfic, i would love some feedback on it since it had a mixed reception in the few people that voted it. so i know where can i improve. thanks in advance.
2747584 I think the group is dead, I suggest you go to "I just want a comment".
2747804 alrigth, thanks a lot ^^
here is my first try for a fanfic, i would love some feedback on it since it had a mixed reception in the few people that voted it. so i know where can i improve.
thanks in advance.
2747584 I think the group is dead, I suggest you go to "I just want a comment".
2747804 alrigth, thanks a lot ^^