So I'm writing a one-shot for a contest, and I really need another set of eyes to look over it. The story's about Flurry Heart, who's about the same age as the Crusaders were, on the day the Crystal Empire celebrates their release from Sombra's tyranny. It's basically Flurry learning about how terrible a ruler Sombra was. Will somebody please look it over for me?

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Go to these two groups. https://www.fimfiction.net/group/97/looking-for-editors https://www.fimfiction.net/group/27/the-proofreader-group

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Wow, I didn't even know those existed. Thanks!

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You're welcome.

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Sounds quite interesting. How long is the story and when's the deadline?

7033037 What contest is this?

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It's FoME's Imposing Sovereigns II contest.

7033556 Howdy again.

I'll be up for helping you out if, in exchange, you give mine a look and offer feedback. : )

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That sounds fair enough. What do you need me to proofread?

7037858 Just a GDoc, story about diplomacy, anger management, Ember, and Thorax.

I'll PM a link to the story. PM me a link to yours and I'll go through it today. Is there something specific you want me to comment on, or are you just looking for a general check for errors and such?