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http://www.dawnsomewhere.com/forum/?mingleforumaction=viewtopic&t=398.1#postid-5927

Basically look at the latest series of posts and download the alpha build.

What I'm asking you guys to look at is the scripting and referencing parts of the story elements that tells you the following pieces of information.

did you ever gathered that charity has always been in that room?
that she was taught that the outside is dangerous
and good girls listen to their mothers
and by child logic-good girls get visits from their mother.

and can you please screen shot the scenes that tell you this.

edit: and for extra measure.

please show the line that tells you that charity's mother hasn't visited for a long time, after that scene charity had an interaction with her mother.

Quoting the pieces of dialogue or even making the screenshots. Because frankly, when this game is finished. I don't want to rewrite the game with the assumption that you are all idiots that needs an exposition dump.

The build can be found on page 1.


Please post on the thread linked. Not on here.

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