I'm nearly done with my Fusion Life story, but I've hit a snafu, I seem to have trouble with a pre-war part and I need aid writing it out eloquently, any and all aid will be deeply appreciated.

Story is rated mature and there's but the smallest of clop, like barely any.

So that folks here don't need to read over 70,000 words to help you, could you give us some detail on what you're having trouble with?