Looking for some feedback to improve my story.

TLuna Angels

• MLP: FiM
• Dark
• Adventure

Deemed by society as outcasts, misfits, losers, no good punks. Apart they are nothing together they are Luna Angels

• Narcotics
• Sex
• Violence
• Death
• Profanity
• Anthro
• Alt. Universe
• Big Mac
• OC
• Other

anarchywolf18 · 12k words  ·  19  3 · 893 views

7862588 You should also drop your story in:

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7862589
Why?

7862591 Why not? The more feedback you get, the better, right?

7862592
True.