Looking for some feedback to improve my story.
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Looking for some feedback to improve my story.
- MLP: FiM
- Dark
- Adventure
Deemed by society as outcasts, misfits, losers, no good punks. Apart they are nothing together they are Luna Angels7862588 You should also drop your story in:
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Why?
7862591 Why not? The more feedback you get, the better, right?
7862592
True.