Hi everypony,

My next story would be called Fun on The Other Side. I would like to have some feedback on this chapter of this new story. There will be more chapters to this story. Here is the Google Doc: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1r2kel6ilzl8eSI7NNpOSl9xy7kk2bp7-W292IwG1kXo/edit?usp=drivesdk

Warning: This fic draft may contain sexual scenes, scenes of gender change, and swearing.

Please PM me or reply to this forum to provide some feedback or comment on this chapter.