Hi,

I started a new fic called "All The Time In The World." It's my attempt at bridging G4 with G5, while also telling my OC's story. I'd really appreciate any comments or constructive criticism that I can get. I'd love to improve my writing!

Thanks!

TAll The Time In The World

• MLP: FiM
• MLP Gen 5
• Dark
• Adventure
• Mystery

Exactly ninety days have passed since Sunny Starscout did the impossible and reunited ponykind. Once her lighthouse is rebuilt, she finds an old book in Bridlewood, and discovers that a pony has been watching all along.

• Death
• Profanity
• Alt. Universe
• Luna
• OC
• Starlight Glimmer
• Izzy Moonbow
• Sunny Starscout

Clockwork2003 · 20k words  ·  52  8 · 1k views

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Well it got featured so you're doing something right.

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Eyup.