I have begun writing my version of Grievous Galleria [from my story Dark Deception: Friendship is magic] now, since this is the case and chapter five hasn't arrived yet, [nor will it until sometime after September] I need suggestions and advice for some things, if anyone is interested in helping me out, let me know.

And all help would be greatly appreciated and you will be credited.

Please and thank you to anyone who wants to help.