Hi everypony, I need some feedback on my new project "To Equestria And Beyond", I've put it on hiatus as of late as I want to build up my skills and I wanted to know from anyone who has read this story of mine what they think of it. I want as much collective feedback as possible as I want to improve this story by any means necessary, so please, comment any thoughts on what you think of the story and if you haven't read the story yet, take a look and come back with your thoughts.

NightFurySpeedy Out

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I think this group is died