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Wildcard25
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Blade's sure giving attitude to them. Either he thinks they're cowards for only caring about helping when it's a magical problem that concerns them and ignore when it's other world shattering problems like the Kraang or the Triceratons, or he's just trying to stay tough and be ready in case any say something to Princess Celestia that doesn't sit right with him

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Either way is accurate. Besides, he's gonna draw his sword the second they mention his friends.

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Tagg is right, it is both.

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Maybe also the thought the Council probably knew he was prisoner of the Kraang and never tried to mount a rescue on him

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I thought you were making an idea. Blade would probably think that.

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I found a version of King unmasked.

Don’t worry, I found another unmasked version of King that will make things better.

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I'm pretty sure the skull is attached to King... permanently.

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The EPF soldier that arrived with the Utrom Council approached Leo. The Hexsquad and Team American Dragon were waiting in anticipation for what would happen. The man the held out his hand.

Walks: Leonardo.

Leo: Commander Walker (Leo shakes his hand)

Walks: I told you can call me Walks. (Turns to the other Ninjas and Rainbooms.) I trust you kids are doing well. (He gave Raph a fist bump)

Sunset: Doing fine, Walks.

Jake: Woah, hold on, rewind!

Edna: Yeah, who’s baldy over here.

Walks: You know it’s not nice to call people bald. Anyway, I’m Commander Robert Walker, Commanding Officer of the Earth Protection Force, but my friends call me Walks.

Leo: Commander Walker and his team has helped us whenever the EPF got involved.

Mikey: Like how he helped me and Casey when we were trapped and about to be dissected.

Sunset: Or when Armagon attacked.

Raph: And when Dregg attacked.

Pinkie: And when VILE tried to steal the mutagen.

Twilight: Or when Middleton was attacked by giant bugs and plants.

Walks: Hey you kids did fine work.

Gus: Woah, you actually helped.

Walks: That’s right, kid.

Gus: (Gus stared at him with admiration) …will you adopt me?

Walks: What?

Gus: What?

Gus then hides behind the group embarrassed


That last bit was a reference to Across the Spiderverse, where Gwen said the same thing about Jessica Drew.

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I wonder what would happen if the skull mask from King was accidentally taken off and how will the heroes and villains react to it.

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If they do, then it would slightly be a reference to Evil Con Carne, with Estroy's helmet.

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I still say that skull is permantly attached to King’s head

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I am not sure if I remembered that show, but I fully remembered the show, The Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy.

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He made an appearance in the show "Grimm and Evil", back when both of them were in the same shows, but then they chose to separate it overtime.

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Oh okay. That makes sense.

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Continuation form Meeting Commander Walker

Gus: Will you adopt me?

Walks: What?

Gus: What?

Gus hid behind his friends in embarrassment.

Luz: Sorry about Gus, he gets excited.

Walks: I get it. He actually sounds like my kid.

(Some introductions and backstory on our heroes, blah blah blah)

Just then the Dragon Council has had enough.

Counciler Kulde: Enough! (Turns to Bishop) You dare bring a human here without our permission!

Bishop: Commander Walker insisted on coming when he heard of Chang’s escape.

Walks: This Chang woman, along with Abigail Finn and an unknown third party have bad intentions for my city, and everywhere else in particular. I’m here to learn as much about this woman so my unit can help stop her.

Councillor Andam: This is a magic problem, it shouldn’t involve you.

Walks: Believe me, magic still freaks me out. But if there’s a threat to New York, and Earth, than the Earth Protection Force will be involved in stopping them, and we are not looking for your permission.

Leo: Neither are we.

The council were shocked by how this man just spoke to them, but before they could say anything, Jake spoke up.

Jake: Council, if I may. Maybe we should consider their help. And maybe we should be more involved in stopping non-magical threats as well.


And that’s all I got so far. Also a little foreshadowing to Pervis Walker’s introduction.

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A two scenes where Commander Walker returns.


During the Final Battle against the Dark Dragon and his Shade Demons.

The Heroes were battling against them, when an object was thrown at the Shades, which then exploded a bright light, disintegrating the shades. Then a few EPF Soldiers came in blasting the Shades with blasts of light. One approached Leo, it was Walks underneath the mask.

Walks: I hope we're not too late.

Raph: Nope, we're just getting started.

Mikey: Nice blasters.

Walks: According to what the Dragon council told us, these light ray guns would be the most effective way to defeat these shades.

Jake: Guess working with the Dragon Council was the right call.

Walks: My troops and I will handle these shades; you kids focus on Chang and the Dark Dragon.

The gang left to face them, leaving the EPF to face the Shades.

Walks: Alright, EPF, LET'S LIGHT THEM UP!!!


And during the Epilogue.


Leo was talking to Walks on his T-Phone.

Leo: So now everything is taken care of.

Walks: That's good to hear. You kids did a good job like always.

Walks was walking up to his home, where he was now wearing a white v-neck t-shirt, blue flannel shirt, light blue jeans and brown boots.

Leo: Thanks. But it was a difficult battle. And leading that many numbers.

Walks: Hey now, Leo, you led them efficiently, especially for someone your age. And remember what you told me your father once said.

Leo: Let nothing weigh me down.

Walks: Yes. And even if you do, you can always come talk to me.

Leo: Thanks Walks. I'll see you around.

Walks: Later, kid.

Walks hangs up the phone and enters his house. Once inside, he sees his wife taking a dish out of the oven, with his baby daughter in her high chair watching.

Walks: Hi, babe. (He kisses the woman) How was your day, Millie?

Millie: It was busy taking care of this little sweetie. (Gestures to the baby who was babbling to her daddy.)

Walks: Hey Jenna, sweetie. (Picks up the baby and gives her a kiss) Where's our boy?

Pervis: Right here, pop. (Pervis walks in as Walks ruffles his hair)

Walks: How was your day sport?

Pervis: Me, Zach and Max are making real progress in the comic.

Walks: That's good to hear. Believe it or not, I met a kid that sounds exactly like you.


A little introduction to Pervis before he appears in the Scooby Doo crossover. Also, with Master Splinter gone, Leo would need an adult to got to advise to, which is what Walks does as he has more experience in being a leader.

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I'll keep this in mind. And while I don't deny Leo misses Splinter and such. He's already proven to be an effective leader even with Splinter gone

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Nice intro to Pervis.

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It’s not a cat. King doesn’t even have whiskers. So, King pretty much looks like a dog.

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It almost looks like a little fox to me given that King's tail is puffy and his body.

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So may I ask, which chapter’s gonna be next?

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Well, I was thinking the next chapter could be about them exploring the Isle of Drago, the Rainbooms sharing the events of the Fall Formal, Battle of the Bands, the Friendship Games, and Camp Everfree. And the Turtles sharing the events of Kavaxas.

They could meet Sun Park and also see the Rouges Gallery of threats to the Magic World in the training hall, some will include Kavaxas and even Grogar.

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Leo & Sunset: Grogar!?

Mikey; Who’s Grogar?

Leo: Didn’t you pay attention to Princess Twilight’s story on Gusty the Great?

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That could work actually, and that some of them would point out a few things. (And note, this is all theory. I'll see if I can try to come up with something for them. as well as others like the AM Dragon and Owl House crew could also have theories of their own.)

1) Like say, the Element of magic was somewhere in between light and dark. When it sensed true friendship within Twilight and her friends, it granted them their powers, but when Sunset put the crown on, the Element of Magic had sensed the years of bullying, cruelty and dishonesty she had displayed, thus turning her into a darker version of herself, as if it was sort of granting her wish at the same time.

2) And during the Battle of the Bands, Sunset also helped the Rainbooms realize something as he told the others. That when they gained the power of harmony, they shortly formed the band. However, because of the little things (Like Rainbow's ego, Rarity's creative contribution, Fluttershy not being able to sing her songs, Applejack complaining about Rarity and Rainbow, and Pinkie being Pinkie) that got to them, it ended up creating a rift, and made them realize that if they don't work things out, it would become something else. And once Sunset realized that, and helped unite the girls, that's when the power of Harmony accepted her as its bearer.

3) And during the Friendship Games, the girls would pony up, by showing the truest part of themselves, but then Twilight's pendant began to take their magic. And without the girls, the magic that was within them became neutral and raw magic that was stored within it. And when Twilight opened the pendant, the neutral and raw magic turned her into a monster because she didn't understand friendship and only cared about studying magic, which the magic mistook it for dark intentions. And once Sunset wielded that said magic, it recognized her as an element bearer and helped her achieve the impossible.

4) And during that time, when Equestrian Magic was at Camp Everfree, Twilight was still afraid. And seeing the girls gaining magic, Twilight kept thinking she might be responsible. And Trixie and Spud would say...

"Uh, no offense girl," said Trix, "But how could you infect them with magic?"

"Yeah, ever since the uh, Fall Formal?" asked Spud, to which the Rainbooms nodded, "The girls gained magic from Twilight's crown. That was like, long before the Friendship Games. So after Princess Twilight took the crown back and the portal closed, this caused the full part of their magic to dampen, leaving them only to gain their pony features by playing music and showing the truest parts of themselves. And after the Friendship Games, they gained their magic back. So their magic, seeing that they are more than worthy of being element bearers, caused them to gain upgrades to face future dangers. So you couldn't have been infecting them, because you chose to suppress it on your own and not showed it often, so by the time you did accept it, and that you were part of the Harmonic equasion, that's how you eventually began to show the full potential of your magic."

This would stun them, as Jake and Trix revealed that Spud's actually a genius, hence how he helped open that box from their enemy Panderis.

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That's good, but I was thinking Spud’s genius should actually be revealed in a chapter where Eli Pandarus kidnaps Amity to drain her magic in order to become powerful. Like when he instantly hacks into Pandarus' security system and shuts it down. And when they question that he doesn't act smart, he gives them the similar answer he gave to the other students at the Pandarus Institute.

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Alright now, took me a while, but I got something.
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"So this, Fall Formal you're talking about, what is that?" asked Amity.

"It's sort of a dance," said Luz, "It's where you have to wear a formal attire during the Fall season."

"My, you certainly know your dress code, Luz." said Rarity.

"Heh, I get that a lot." said Luz.

"So what exactly happened?" asked Amity.

"The girls told us about it when we first met them, but not the full version." said April.

"See, it's like this." said Sunset, " Long before I met Celestia she asked me to make friends. I wanted to. But...I ended up being scared to make one and just left. I ended up lying to Celestia that I couldn't make friends and I kept lying to her ever since. When she found out, and after she showed me the mirror, I later ran away through there and to another world. And during my, ahem, bullying days. Once the portal to Equestria opened, I was able to steal Princess Twilight's crown. But when I came back, I found out the crown was gone."

"How did that happen?" asked Gus.

"It was my fault." said Fluttershy, "I was busy handing out fliers for the animal shelter I work at, but no one took it. When I saw the crown, I thought it belonged to the school, so I gave it to Principal Celestia."

"And my guess the reason for that is because the crown goes to whoever voted the most for that said person, right?" asked Jake.

"That's right." said Sunset, "Twilight, er, Princess Twilight, followed me to get it back. Her friends wanted to come, but Celestia told her no."

"Why not?" asked Hailey.

"Because we were there at the school," said Rarity, "If her friends came with her, then everyone would get confused to which is which, which Sunset would use to her advantage."

"What was the difference between Princess Twilight and your Twilight?" asked Willow.

"Here's a picture." said Pinkie as she brought a picture.

Then they saw two different Twilights, with King saying, "How can anyone not tell the difference? One is pretty and the other is a nerd."

"Hey!!" said Twilight, feeling offended.

"King!!" scolded Luz. "That wasn't very nice."

"I'm just saying, if there was another you, I wouldn't be so easily fooled, even if you did wear a different disguise."

"Uh, didn't you one time get fooled when...?" said Eda before being cut off.

"I don't wanna talk about it!!" said King.

"Anyway," said Applejack, "When we first met Princess Twilight, we thought she was a bit weird. Considering the way she moved, the way she acted, and the fact that she knew our names."

"From the sound of it, seeing that she was in a human body the first time, she must've had a hard time controlling it." said Rose.

"Don't forget the fact that by going to a different dimension, they don't follow the same rules." said Fu Dog.

"When I cornered Twilight, I boasted that it was my crown, even when it didn't have my Cutie Mark on it." said Sunset, "I even asked her what would happen if you bring Equestrian magic to the world. And when she didn't answer, I boasted that she wasn't that bright."

"Didn't her Spike make a retort?" asked Mikey.

"A what?" said a confused Casey.

"You know, like a counter." said Mikey, "It would be something like, 'if you're so smart what would you think would happen?' Then again, we don't know a lot of stuff either, considering it's uh...what would always say, Donnie, in what again?"

"In theory." said Donnie, "But he does have a point, I mean not a lot of folks knows what would happen, because in one world you have magic, but in another, there isn't and only technology."

"And after I took the crown, I put it on and wanted to harness its power." said Sunset, "But instead of turning me into an Alicorn, I ended up slowly turning into a demon monster. It felt...terrifying. I was never so scared in my life. After Twilight and the others freed me, I realized what I did was horrible. And if I had just listened to Celestia, I wouldn't have turned out like that."

"Wait, why did the crown turn you into a monster?" asked a confused Eda.

"Can I throw in my two cents?" asked Fu Dog.

"What is it, Fu?" asked Rarity.

"See, Harmony is not something to be messed with." said Fu Dog, "It's also a living entity. But in psychology terms, harmony refers to a positive state of inner peace, calmness, and balance, as well as the feeling of being tuned with the world. In the social sciences, it is used to describe a pattern of relationships within a social group and between individuals and their social context. And from what you told us, each of Princess Twilight's friends possess a certain trait. Honesty, Loyalty, Generosity, Kindness and Laughter. And it was because of that, this allowed her to learn the true meaning. And when they came together, both she and them created the Element of Magic, because she allowed friendship in her heart."

Fu looked at Sunset. "And from what I had to guess, when you put on the crown, Harmony itself had sensed something was off with you. Then it looked through your memories and, in your heart, you didn't possess any of those traits, therefore because of it, you didn't know the meaning of friendship or harmony. Causing you to gain the darker version stored in it to teach you a lesson of sorts. And when you nearly destroyed them, the crown had sensed those traits in them, granting them the power of harmony. And when they purged the darkness away, they also took what was in your heart away, which caused you to realize your actions. Though harmony sometimes destroys the darkness, it spared you because it sensed you weren't beyond saving."

"Hmm, that is true." said Fugitoid, "The Elements of Harmony purged the darkness from Princess Luna and Stygian."

"After that whole ordeal," said Sunset as she continued, "Instead of going back home, I stayed behind to make up for my mistakes. But...nobody gave me a chance, only Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy did."

"What?" said a confused Casey, "What about Rainbow, Rarity, and Applejack? Didn't they help you too?"

However, one look at the latter, they saw they had sheepish looks on their faces.

"You did help her too, right?" said Raph.

"Er...we were still bitter over what she did to us during her bullying days." said Applejack.

"I know I didn't give her a chance either because of, well, you know," said Trixie, "But you three weren't exactly nice to her either. Not to mention you broke Princess Twilight's promise of looking after her and helping her."

(I don't know much what happened between the Fall Formal and Battle of the Bands, I was just making up as I go along. That and a commentor named SuperEthan talked about it and helped put a few things in perspective)

"Yeah...we're not proud of it, either." said Rainbow in shame.

"So uh, after that, what happened?" said Willow, wanting to change the subject for their sake.

"Our school was preparing for a showcase," said Fluttershy, "But because of the Fall Formal, we ended up attracting the Dazzlings' attention."

"The Sirens turned humans that you girls were talking about?" asked Spud.

"That's right." said Pinkie, "When they came, they sang their songs and absorbed their negativities. But we weren't affected because of our magic. And every now and then we played music, we gained pony features."

"The girls formed the band before the Dazzlings came but," said Sunset as she wanted to change the subject. "But..."

"Don't tell me they didn't want you to be in the band too?" said a concerned, Trix.

"Uh, yeah, because it's my fault." said Rainbow.

"We were able to call Princess Twilight for help." said Sunset, "But the problem was, the portal could open up once every thirty moons, but thanks to her, she was able to open a portal at any time. She came over to help. But...she was focused on the songs, she didn't know that the girls were arguing."

"You girls argued?" said a concerned Emira.

"What were you arguing about?" asked Edric.

"See, each of the girls were arguing over the smallest things and let it get to them." said Sunset, "Rainbow kept boasting that it was her band and that she wrote songs. Fluttershy complained that she also writes songs, but Rainbow wouldn't play any of it or give her a chance. Pinkie was being, well, Pinke. Applejack constantly complained about Rainbow and Rarity. Rarity constantly wanted to do our outfits for performances."

Sunset looked at Rarity and said, "And Rarity, no offense, but adding metallic tassels during our audition was a horrible idea."

"I beg your pardon?!" said Rarity feeling insulted.

"Uh, she does have a point." said Trixie, "For two things. One, the cowboy look is more in Applejack's department, because she looks better in it."

Applejack looked at Trixie surprised, even the others.

"Well you do." said Trixie, "You make that look twice as better than anyone else in school, and it fits your style more than anybody."

"Er...thanks." said Applejack as she was surprised by what Trixie said, and she could tell she was honest.

"And second," said Trixie as she focused back to Rarity, "Did you forget what Photo Finish and her band tried to do to you during your audition?"

Rarity winced at that, remembering that time.

"When the girls reached the finals," said Trixie, "The Dazzlings tricked Trixie into trapping the Rainbooms in the trap door of the stage. Which in turn allowed the Dazzlings to absorb their negative energy of their magic."

"When I realized what the Dazzlings were up to, and whilst Princess Twilight was still in despair," said Sunset, "I was able to put a stop to it and told them that ever since they started the band, they let little things get to them. I didn't want to say anything because I was still new to it and still had a lot to learn. And if they don't work things out, the magic of friendship could become something else."

"Dang, girl, that sounds rough." said Trix.

"And I thought we had problems." said Jake as the rest of the AM Dragon team voiced in agreement, same with Luz and her Hexside group.

"We were able to put our differences aside and put a stop to the Dazzlings." said Applejack, "But then we saw Sunset ponying up with us too."

"Then that's a clear sign that because of your strong desire of wanting to help them, and that you understand the magic of friendship, the power of Harmony granted you that power, making you worthy of its bearer." said Fu Dog.

"We were able to destroy the source of their power and we haven't seen them since." said Rainbow Dash.

"At least until Princess Twilight had a vision about them being involved with our enemy, the Shredder." said Mikey. Then gave a smug look at Leo and said, "And where she also saw our fearless leader in her dreams."

When they saw Leo giving a cough of nervousness and blushing whilst looking away, it gave them the confirmation, causing the guys to laugh, whilst the girls thought it was cute.

"Then came the Friendship Games." said Sunset, "When we were at CHS, Twilight was busy snooping around."

"Wait, you were snooping around?" asked a confused Luz. "Why?"

"Turns out what happened at Canterlot High got her attention," said Spike, "When those to instances happened, she was curious and went over to see what was going on."

"You do know the term, curiosity kill the cat, right?" asked Spud, causing him to be elbowed by Trix, "What, it's true."

"You know, in fairness, you could've just asked what was going on instead of sneaking around like a civilized person." said Spike to Twilight, which she glared, but sighed, knowing that was true.

"When the Friendship Games came along, Vice-Principle Luna asked me to make sure no magic would be involved. But unfortunately I had trouble figuring out and that it would be too much pressure. I tried asking Princess Twilight for help, but she had problems of her own."

"The Time Traveling one." said Mikey, only to be clonked at the back of his head by Raph.

"I didn't want to partake in it," said Twilight, "But I didn't have any other choice because former Principle Cinch had blackmailed me into joining the games because if I didn't, she'd revoke my application to go to Everton."

"Wait, she blackmailed you?!" exclaimed Amity.

"Not cool, dudes." said Jake.

"Glad she didn't go to our school instead of Rockwood." said Trix.

"And being constantly treated like garbage by my former classmates didn't exactly help either." said Twilight.

"They kept on hounding her and breaking her confidence," said Spike, "They didn't even support her during the second event at the games. When Applejack helped her, one of her former classmates said, quote, Good advice from a person you're competing against, end quote. And you had no idea how many times I wished I walked up to Sourpuss and yelled at her that at least Applejack was being a more supportive teammate than she was."

"Uh, I her name is Sour Sweet." said Casey.

"Trust me, if you had met her, you'd call her that too." said Spike.

"Given what you described, I wouldn't be surprised." said Eda.

"But before I got inside, I made a tracking device that could help me track the so called anomalies, or Equestrian Magic in this case." said Twilight, "However, I didn't know it would take the girls' magic. I wanted to understand it, and I kept making things worse."

"And...I was really horrible to her." said Sunset, "I yelled at Twilight for tampering with things she doesn't understand and that she put my friends in danger as a result. She ended up crying and ran away."

"Not cool." said Hailey as the others agreed.

"And I was such an idiot." said Sunset, "I was too focused on what Twilight did to remind myself that she wasn't the same headstrong Alicorn we knew. For back then, our Twilight was overly sensitive, had no friends at her side and her talents meant to be praised only to be brushed aside by her own peers as they were too focused on their own skills. And what was worse, I acted like I did back during my bullying days. I couldn't even apologize to her for scaring her like that."

"That may be true." said Gramps. "However, just as you are fault for taking it out on one who didn't mean to, she was not in the right either. For one should not tamper with things they do not understand. In fact, after hearing about this from the council, I looked at this charm in an alternate world, where they didn't want to tell her. Then she snapped by doing this."

Gramps showed them a hologram of Twilight via charm. "I want to understand how it works," Twilight uttered. "All I wanted was to figure out what it does, how it functions, why it exists...Why can't I just do whatever I want without everyone looking down at me, forcing me to compete in these stupid games, and telling me I can never learn what I want!?" Expressing her anger as she tipped over the breaking point, she didn't notice her hands covered in a dark aura, being absorbed into the slightly opened pendant as it swirled with the stolen magic. Glaring at Sunset, she held out her spectrometer, tears streaming down her face as she was no longer going to be told what to do by anyone. "I'm unleashing this magic, and I don't care what happens as long as I have the brains to finally understand it once I do!"

When it faded, everyone was shocked by what she had said, but not as shocked as Twilight.

"I...I didn't..." said Twilight as she couldn't believe it and looked down in despair, with Sunset and the others comforting her.

"But you did think of it, but didn't want to say it." said Gramps. "Though it is admirable that you want to learn how they function, you also have to learn that there is a reason secrets like this must be kept. For if it fell into the wrong hands, anyone could use it to destroy anything around them. As what the Dragon Council had witnessed when you brought your students over to Equestria, as well as this VILE, if I am not mistaken. Harmonic energies are extremely powerful, that much is true, but such a force cannot be controlled. It is not like some car you drive where it does your bidding, it is a living thing that would only agree to allow you to cast magic, if you are willing to work with it. Hence why we train to harness our dragon powers, if we do not, then our dragon sides would take over and we would hurt those we care about."

"So that's why you kept training me." said Jake.

"And because of the magic," said Fu Dog, "Whatever you did to bring that part out, and the pendant took your magic. Without the girls' traits, the magic that was within it was raw and neutral. When she opened it, it turned her into a monster. And because she didn't understand friendship and only wanted to study magic, Harmony itself mistook it for dark intentions. And once Sunset began to wield it, it recognized her as an element bearer and helped her achieve it."

"So what happened next?" asked Hooty.

"After I was able to free Twilight," said Sunset, "Cinch wanted us to forfeit and thought we were cheating. She refused to accept that it was her fault and threatened to take it to the school board."

"But she didn't exactly have any proof." said Spike, "And because of it, she was fired and Cadence took over. We didn't see her until after that mess with Juniper."

"Yikes, you guys have been through a lot." said Jake. "So what happened next?"

"We went to Camp Everfree to get a break from the craziness we had to endure." said Pinkie, "And we didn't know the Turtles and our other friends were on the roof of our bus."

"I was busy testing the Kraang's portal tech so we could use it to escape, or go to different worlds, or to visit Princess Twilight." said Donnie, "But then Mikey and Casey jumped through and we went after them. And seeing we had no way, we had to stay at the camp to keep an eye on things."

"Though it didn't help that the camp was closed to being forclosed and sold to Filthy Rich." said Shinigami.

"Wait, they were going to shut down the camp?" asked Haley, "Why would Filthy do that?"

"It turned out that Gloriosa, the owner of the camp, was getting behind on payments and nearly ran out of funds, so she had to borrow money from Filthy Rich," said Sunset, remembering what she read in Gloriosa's mind. "And when she couldn't pay, he wanted to buy the land and tear it down so he could build a spa there."

"Which is completely ridiculous." said Raph, "Why the heck would anyone be stupid enough to build a spa all the way out of town? That's like trying to build a waterpark in the middle of the Sahara Desert."

"But during our stay there, Twilight still had some leftover magic." said Sunset, "But she kept being afraid that Midnight Sparkle is inside of her. and overtime, the girls and I gained new abilities at the same time. But during that time, other magical disasters are happening."

"And miss genius over here kept overreacting, thinking that she was responsible." said Raph, causing her Leo to bump his elbow against him.

"Raph!!" scolded Leo.

"Well it's true." said Raph, "It's not our fault she constantly overreacts over everything. I mean seriously, she always overthinks overreacts of every single detail. I mean just because she's smart, doens't mean she has all the answers. Sunset didn't hold all the answers to magic related things either, cause she at least reaches out to people. And at least her friends are concerned for her and want to help her out, it's not our fault she kept pushing them away."

Whilst Twilight looked down in guilt whilst also realizing how silly she was for thinking that, Sunset said, "But then we found out Gloriosa was behind it. Before the geodes became ours, she used them to become insane with power and take over the camp."

"But thankfully, Master Splinter and the Mutanimals, along with the Dazzlings, came along and we tried to help them stop Gloriosa." said Leo. "Afterwards, she became a full-time ninja."

"But during that time, we each went on our own spirit quests." said Pinkie Pie, "Sunset fought against her darkness, Rainbow fought against Kraang Subprime, Applejack fought against Rocksteady, Rarity fought against Lord Dregg, Fluttershy fought against Bebop and I fought against Armaggon."

"And it was quite messy and...icky." said Rarity in distain, which caused the others to roll their eyes at this.

"After that, we helped them save Camp Everfree and made sure Filthy Rich never bought it." said Sunset.

"It was...also before Splinter died." said Leo in sadness, with the others feeling that way too.

(Anyway, that's all I got so far)

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I may use this while they're still on the Isles of Draco. Of course I will make some alterations to it without making some characters out to be pricks and or worse than they act to others

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Good call.
It's all I could think of, and sorry for going a bit overboard with this.

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Here's an idea, based off a pitch from Solartiger and RedTagg.

While exploring, Mikey and Pinkie find a giant world map with glowing marks on certain places in the world. Sun Park explains that those marks are the location of every hidden magical and supernatural individual in the world.

Pinkie: Hey look, girls, there's Canterlot!

Applejack: Guess that makes sense, with all the Equestrian Magic about.

Lao Shi: Indeed. It should come as no surprise that your city is on the Dragon Council's radar.

Sun Park: After all, that kind of magic doesn't get by without our knowledge.

Casey: So what are all these spots in New York? (Pointed to sone marks on the New York section of the map.)

Sun: Well, here a clan of gargoyles reside on the Erie Building, a Greek demigod camp nestled on Long Island, an Egyptian's magician home in Brooklyn, and three middle school children who battle evil ghost near Time Square. And that's only to name a few.

Donnie: Amazing! And to think, with all the things we faced in New York, we would’ve noticed magical creatures in our city.

Jake: Magical creatures are extremely good at hiding and letting you see them when they want you to see them, yo.

Leo: And I thought ninjas were masters of invisibility.

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Nice. I'll find a way to use it

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Here’s an idea, the Magic in Manhattan fic will lead into two of my separated fics, Legend of the Purple Nightmares and Blue Beetle. For the Hexsquad, the Kraang portal device was hidden in the Boiling Isles and wondered how it got there in the first place while Jake Long and his grandfather were captured by the Purple Nightmares thanks to the Silent Slasher who was watching the heroes from a distance.

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Lao Shi is Jake's Grandfather, not Uncle

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So… do you guys have some ideas that will lead into the events of my fanfics?

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