Hey everyone, I have some OC Bakugans I'd like some opinions on. If anyone is willing to help.

7525025 I'll take a look at them

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The first one is Aquos Boxita: A Wolf-like Bakugan that uses Boxing skills. The twist is her offensive and defensive abilities aren't water-based, but Ice-based.

7525203 Sounds like a close range and which show are you use for a base?

7525205
None, I thought of it myself.

7525207 I meant for your story today's show or the OG one?

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Actually, I'm helping a friend who's planning an MLP/Bakugan story and offered my OC Bakugans. But what's your opinion on Boxita, especially her twist?

7525218 She seem to be best at close range attacks which means she would have some problem with fly if she didn't ice abilities

7525225
Overall?

7525228 She's not OP

7525234
OP?

7525235 Over Powered

7525245
Okay. Next Darkus Kalnius: a Elder Robotallion-like Bakugan who has judgemental views of the other factions

7525246 Personality wise he is a cross between of Magneto and Dr. Crowler and his combat style?

7525259
Fast and strong.

7525262 So hit and run

7525265
Little bit. Next is Haos Yamatori: an anthromorphic fox combined with a samurai.

7525266 Which weapon does Yamatori use?

7525273
Any. Yamatori pulls different weapons corresponding with his abilities out from a ball of light.

7525277 Then he sounds like a Benkai Bakugan

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Next is Ventus Vultrios: a Human/Vulture hybrid who controls wind, rain, and lightning. Don't call him a hawk.

7525333 Nice

7525344
And that's it. So opinion?

7525348 Well I think you should change "Don't call him a hawk." to "Don't call him a chicken." that way your friend will have a element of Humor in their story

7525357
Ok. But about all of my OCs?

7525362 Over all they're great not too OP or a marry Sue but I'm only counting four

7525218
Is Spike going to be a Brawler in that story there?

7525384
No

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Thanks.

7525499
Why couldn't he?

7525565
He's a dog.

7525566
Then why not making him human though?
Its really not impossible to have a dog who is clearly sapient as a human turn into human form at will(or just have Spike be human in the first place rather than a dog).

Heck, there's literally a dog(who's a main character) that is a Brawlerr in the reboot.

7525566
Battle Planet has a dog Brawler. His name is Lightning and he uses Darkus.

7525570
Indigo made it clear it's not happening.

7525569
I know.

7525571
If Spike being a dog is a problem that makes him unable to brawl then why couldn't he make Spike human then one way or another?
its really unfair for Spike to get excluded hard like that, especially when the dog issue is so easily fixable there.

7525591
Not my call

7525592
Then why not tell him what I said then?
Like show him the comment and such.

And the fact someone else pointed it out that a dog became a brawler shows other readers would like to see Spike be a brawler too.

7525599
Eh.

7525609
So the author is going to be notified then about this?

7525611
I honestly don't like playing messenger.

7525623
Honestly the author needs to know about the feedback though.
I don't even know his/her username there at all anyway.

Why not at least point him/her to this thread to see whats going?

7525500 You're welcome

7525625
Indigo Lightning Strike

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👍

7525629👍

7525628
Does he happen to know about this thread anyway?

7526322
No.

7526323
I feel like you could show it to him anyway to see the feedback.

I just realized he was the author of that Beyblade fic I found and commented on months ago on here.

7526326
I can't.