Half-Breeds- Foal Island 3 members · 0 stories

Welcome to Foal Island, home to the Half-Breeds

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430426
i posted it last night
i think i did well (seeing as i just put the letters of the alaphabet into different combinations)

430421
sorry to say, i already have a 'him'
he's introduced in the next chapter

430411
Well, this is the only way he could be 'him'. Creating a world for outcasts, only to find out anypony can get there through the everfree forest in a certain spot, not knowing it would mess with anypony who entered

430410
hmmm
if you ask me, it sounds a taaaad marysueish
i had a character like that, and i'm surprised people put up with her
how about you seperate them into multiple characters, but don't forget to add flaws to their strengths
just a little help, pls don't be offended -w-'

430402
is that all one character? or several

430401
kirin, pony, changeling, and hippogriff

430395
Amazing! What type?

430391
My OC is Half-breed

Yo this is for anyone helping me make this story.
Thanks for pitching in to this terrible idea :rainbowlaugh:
And for using part of your day to help me make my dream come true.

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