ERainbow Dash goes to The Averages Tower

• MLP: FiM
• Adventure
• Mystery

Rainbow Dash is looking for someone who can save a special day for her friends.

• Rainbow Dash
• Daring Do
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Khampostel · 9.8k words · 158 views

Review: Rainbow Dash goes to the Avergages Tower

Tags: Adventure, Mystery

Summary: Pictures at the beginning of the chapter. So they can get a lot of likes. (oh rating is disabled hmmmm Bad fiction and couldn’t take criticism.)

Review: in my eyes, I just don’t think this is a bad fiction only my deepest concern about this fiction is that he credits the cover and not the art in the fiction.  However, this is very bad.

The grammar and idea are fine the flow is a little bit choppy a tiny bit. I like to give this at least a 6/10

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Curious, is this a good review? ha ha ha

Don't worry, the disabled images and votes are not the only strange thing here.

Out of that. Thanks for the review. I very much hope that it has been read in full. It was my second Fanfic to write, god! It was a pain to do it, at that moment I thought about leaving all this fanfic stuff, but the criticism I received later motivated me to continue. I added characters, somewhat convincing conversations. It even has an alternative ending (it's published elsewhere)...haa I was really hoping for more comments on this platform.

You literally made the first comment. ugg

Anyway, thanks again.