Review: I’ll be there for the Highs and Lows

Tags: EQG, Profanity, Drama, Sad, Slice of Life, Alternate Universe

Summary: Alternate universe that could happen.

Review: I have to say it’s pretty good in some ways.  However, it was interesting… I just wish there were more words for this fiction… I mean if it’s short it’s short but if it’s done terribly it could be bad… if it does do good well… good job… Let’s get to the story at hoof.    Ok so, it had an emotional moment.  But it’s not as powerful enough that I read from other fiction…. What you could have done is a few more chapters!  I have to say at least a 5/10… I mean it’s ok I do like it but it’s just too short to have an emotional moment.  The grammar seems slightly different but it’s still good I think Deathofaking was the right decision.  So, this means it’s a 6/10… for me.