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Review: Lost Shadow

Tags: Sex, Gore, Dark, Horror

Summary: What the heck did you do?

Review: The idea is alright… but the endings were super short…  And that’s why this fiction is terrible.  I don’t care about the multiple endings I think it’s great but how you write those endings ended up not as good as I thought it would be.  I truly never wanted to do this but it is a must this is clearly a 3/10… the most disappointing fiction I ever read in 2023. Don't take this as an insult I was hoping to read those multiple endings with more memorable.

My suggestion... reupdate those endings.... and make it shine like a rainbow. You're the author it is never to late to fix it.

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