TThe Looking Glass

• MLP: FiM
• Dark
• Sad
• Sci-Fi

If you stare into the abyss, the abyss will eventually stare back into you... and I have been staring for a long, long time.

• Suicide / Self Harm
• Alt. Universe
• Twilight

wonderkid125 · 10k words  ·  18  1 · 415 views

Review: The Looking Glass

Tags: Suicide/Self Harm, Dark, Sad, Sci-Fi

Summary: A dark fiction with some dull parts to the story.

Review:  It had some weird stuff in it…. I mean the best part was that the story was about to discuss the afterlife but… The story did have some interesting parts in it. Which I won’t say anything about it.  The ship is pretty weird as well a little bit.  Some parts felt like a horror series as well… I mean the window in later paragraphs but… it’s not dark enough :3… 

But it also reminds me of some kind of space odyssey.

However, it was short to tell the tale… I give it at least a 6/10.  There were some good parts but I feel like something might be missing in this story.

May the forth be with you.

Thanks for the review.

I'm glad to see you enjoyed it at least somewhat. Although, I am curious as to which parts you found dull, and what you felt was missing?

At any rate, thanks for taking the time to read and review it

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flurry died? that was pretty dull since well magic... telling and not showing was pretty much what the fiction was missing. it had emotional, yes but it didn't have that show emotional vibe...