EThe Legend Starts

• MLP: FiM
• Adventure
• Mystery
• Slice of Life

William, a normal human, finds out that his father was working on something very special before getting arrested.

• Human
• Celestia
• Luna
• Philomena
• OC
• Discord

654_nosneb · 28k words  ·  30  5 · 1k views

Review: The Legends Starts

Tags: Enter gaps, Adventure, Mystery, Slice of Life

Summary: Scrolling down on an enter (which should be *** or just the hr)

Review: Ok, I did love the last story A Legends Returns and this still is a good story unless you don’t like entering gaps to scroll down… I guess it’s a person's style that I’m learning and have to deal with…  So, let’s get back to the review.  The flow is great. I love it… all the characters did their part.  I’m excited if they make another sequel.  I want to give this as of today 8/10.  But the space between the spaces is clearly not my favorite thing. (Which is hitting enter 3 to 4 times to make it easier but as a professional I think people still use hr in a great way rather than just hitting enter.)

Conclusion I did like this better than the last one for sure and I think it’s going to be a 7.5/10. It was pretty swell. I can’t go any higher than a 7.5/10.