Summary: How the government wants us to rebel and it’s all their fault for making us this way type.
Review: This fiction is wonderful. I did enjoy myself reading this very interesting plot. Things that I do not like are the enter gaps, Caps for making them shout or scream whichever it was… didn’t say… loss of detail there… and that is all I have to say about it…
Conclusion the story is a 10/10 I think this was good enough to smack me in the face.
Grammar in between gaps of enter space makes me scroll down a lot making me think it’s a longer fiction but it’s not and it’s all false and caps is very hard to read, sometimes it’s awful. 3/10
I give this at least a 5/10.
I’m going
to
make you scroll for this review and see how annoying it
truly
is….
Ps... Title is super wrong... It's (A Legend Returns. ) (and not A legend returns.)
- MLP: FiM
- Adventure
- Mystery
- Tragedy
A human appears in equestria, at the middle of season 5, he doesn't know what's happening but everypony knows him.Review: A Legend Returns.
Tags: Adventure, Mystery, Tragedy
Summary: How the government wants us to rebel and it’s all their fault for making us this way type.
Review: This fiction is wonderful. I did enjoy myself reading this very interesting plot. Things that I do not like are the enter gaps, Caps for making them shout or scream whichever it was… didn’t say… loss of detail there… and that is all I have to say about it…
Conclusion the story is a 10/10 I think this was good enough to smack me in the face.
Grammar in between gaps of enter space makes me scroll down a lot making me think it’s a longer fiction but it’s not and it’s all false and caps is very hard to read, sometimes it’s awful. 3/10
I give this at least a 5/10.
I’m going
to
make you scroll for this review and see how annoying it
truly
is….
Ps... Title is super wrong... It's (A Legend Returns. ) (and not A legend returns.)