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TLuna Angels
Deemed by society as outcasts, misfits, losers, no good punks. Apart they are nothing together they are Luna Angels
anarchywolf18 · 12k words  ·  19  3 · 893 views

Review: Luna Angels

Tags: Sex, Narcotics, Violence, Death, Profanity, Dark, Adventure, Anthro, Alternate Universe (AU)

Summary: Anarchy

Review: It’s still incomplete but it might need a little more to get to the ending of it.  However, this is going to be an incomplete judgment though… let’s take a look. yeap , yeap, yeap, 0_0 ok. 

This fiction is alright so far.  The idea is pretty great. The flow of it is alright for now.  Well, this is going to be short.  I think this fiction is a pretty great idea. It still needs a little bit more character development.

I rate this as an incomplete finalization of 6/10 so far.

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