EShouldering a Holiday Burden

• MLP: FiM
• Slice of Life

With Hearth's Warming fast approaching, Silverstream finds something she'd hoped she never would: a friendship problem that can't be solved.

• Twilight
• Rarity
• Spike
• Gallus
• Silverstream

Ghost Mike · 8.2k words  ·  48  1 · 1.4k views

Review:  Shouldering A Holiday Burden

Summary: Look at the picture, it's a Silverstream and Gallus fiction holiday woooo. 

(Nothing could ever go wrong. Because Lightheart reviewed it.)

Review: welp I look at the Lightheart review… First he did a 10/10 grammar which I highly doubt that it could be a 10/10.  The words are all correct. It's just that you used British English for the word grey but use North American English for color… this is something that I caught.  Stick to 1 dialect.  The grammar here is clearly a 10/10 for mix but that’s not what I'm here for.  For a fiction to be well received I’m truly sorry but I can’t do this.  I can’t give him the hard work that this person put in.  It gives me pain to write this.  But however, there are other grammar errors that I see and it’s not the best.

I take my work very seriously… I did enjoy this but how it ended up like this was decent.

Overall I think this fiction is a 5/10 for me.

A perfect example that 160 dialects of English's do exists.