TWho Killed Captain Shining Armor?

• MLP: FiM
• Comedy
• Random

SUPA ACTION-PACKED MOVIE

• Violence
• Death
• Twilight
• OC
• Shining Armor

TwiFan6789 · 3.3k words  ·  32  0 · 445 views

Review:  Who killed Captain Shining Armor?

Tags: Violence, Death, Comedy, Random.

Summary: Mystery? Tag?  Anywhere?  Hmmm… don’t take this seriously…

Review:  As a reviewer we always have to take things seriously.  Alright let’s take a look at OMG first thing I see is slangs >.> Oh… Oh gosh no… nope nope nope… sure this fiction did amazingly well.  I have to say no for this… it’s slang, it’s not a good thing…  However, many people do love slang if you're getting to the right audience.   Now I have to say it’s still not finished so I’m not sure if I should judge this harshly… or make a great opinion on how this is still alright even though the slang is what kept me playing games… Not sure how the ending will turn out since it is incomplete after all. So, here is what I’m thinking at this time. 

It’s a 5/10 for me.  If it’s posted to be high quality slang is a no.  The other stuff is what time of day, weather, the fiction felt stale.