TUnFetish Business

• Equestria Girls
• Comedy
• Slice of Life

Sonata Dusk uncovers the meaning of an adult term witch leads to some crazy antics from her rambunctious freinds..

• Profanity
• Dazzlings

SunTwi06 · 3.2k words  ·  34  5 · 927 views

Review: Unfetish Business

Tags [profanity] 100%, [comedy] 90%, [Slice of life] 100%

Summary: Sonata doesn’t know what a fetish is and asks the other sirens to tell her.  Which they show her in some weird way. 0_0 …   don’t worry this is still rated T for teens.    :3

Analysis Data: Sonata character doesn’t know what a fetish is.  Which I'm sure she doesn't. I'm sure this is likely cannon. 0_0…  But how it ends is pretty good with that deep mystery on why.

The idea is clearly a 10/10 with canon characters it can be possible.

Flow is clearly a 8/10 there are some rough spots a tiny bit.

Grammar is clearly a 8/10  there are a few mistakes with punctuations.

The dialog did really great and I have to say it’s clearly a 10/10

Final score

37/40

9/10

7471255 Thank you for the review. Also, the other stories in this AU doesn't need to be read in any order in order to understand the story/s. Just thought I'd inform you in case you were wondering

7471264
I read them anyway.

7471265 I would love your thoughts and if you have any ideas, you can present them. I'm all for any/all constructive feedback/praise .