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Righto, moving on Bork & Pinkie written by cucharrador. https://www.fimfiction.net/story/274544/bork-pinkie

This story hasn't been updated for about a year and a half, which is a pity because I'd like to see more. :applejackunsure: Bork and Pinkie is really good. It's a fun little short comedy involving cooking shenanigans right before Hearth's Warming.

The story had good descriptions, the characters fit well, and as expected of a comedy story it made me laugh. The story quickly came into play without having to wait very long, while at the same time not really feeling rushed. There are some unexpected punchlines which worked to good effect for a chuckle or two.

Error-wise there really is nothing to say. It's a little silly, but the story is a comedy so you can't really expect anything less. :rainbowlaugh: If you're looking for a quick read and some laughs, I'd definitely recommend this. :pinkiesmile:

Bork & Pinkie: 85/100
:yay: Exactly what you might expect out of a Pinkie Pie comedy

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