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Would any of you read this grimdark story?


Hush
I should have seen the signs. I should have swallowed my pride. I should have contacted Celestia. I could have saved many, many ponies lives. I could have saved Fluttershy. But she is gone. As I stare though the bulletproof glass that separates me from the animal that has her face, I feel guilt. Fluttershy is dead. Now, there is only a blood sucking creature that I don't have the heart to kill. I know that if anypony found out that I was the cause for this, they would all ask the same thing.
Whty were you keeping hush, Twilight?

Crescent Minor
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5415743 Depends. What's the monster? Not a changeling; they don't drink blood. Is this story in any way based in the human world (seeing as Equestria lacks guns, and so lacks 'bulletproof glass')? And why would Twilight avoid going to Celestia? She never does that.
I would click on it to find out the answers to those questions. If I found those answers interesting, I'd keep reading.

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PM me. Then I'll tell you.

5415743
This sounds incredibly intriguing, It's not something I would write but probably something I'd read.

5415743
I'd write it and maybe even read it.
It's in my wheelhouse for sure.

Could do it like HPL.

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