Well, copy-pasting from Looking for Editors group:

So... I need an editor for a Star Wars Crossover. Specifics are listed below. I need an editor so that he could help me in making it show instead of tell. I have a tendency to copy styles though.

Name: Rowan's Star Wars
Category: Adventure, Crossover
Characters: Other, Twilight Sparkle
Short Description: As the Jedi Order fell, a Knight finds a unicorn whose lineage came from an old legacy of famous lines.
Long Description will contain the opening crawl, the short description, and the name of the Editor.

Now... It would be nice to have an editor... But hey, if that editor has watched TFA (SW VII) then bravo! I guess there are less spoilers then*.

*Spoilers involve Jakku, and the Crossguard saber, probably even Kylo Ren appearing as a pony character here.

You can take a peek at the first chapter (Mare of Tatooine) here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PV4G-EEbVL9Ywcz2MzFlhFIgBgpw7U5YsQf4wIw1hM4/edit?usp=sharing

I'll release it as soon as someone helped me out.

PS: Kylo Ren is best villain-wannabe ever