Anyone wanna Beta a story I just wrote? I usually hang around Fimfiction, but since this story isn't planned on having poni I had to put it on fanfiction and don't know if I can get a pre-reader or editor for it if any of yall could help me that'd be amazing.

It's going to be a HiZ: Human in Zootopia, I'm really trying to make it not cringey but an editor would only help. Genre is SciFi and Slice of Life with some mystery thrown in for spice.

Love you all either way

5767112 Link to story? please?

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LINK

Sorry, I fell asleep! Thanks for taking a look at it!

5768113 I wont beta it. i just want to read it. I have a likeing for HiZ fics.

5768202 That's 100% okay with me, I love to share my writing with people, hope you like it!

5768255 I like it very mutch. hope you post it and make more.

5768277 Thanks!!! The first draft was about 1000 words shorter and didn't have Briggs and more than a few plot holes, I hope I left as few of them as possible in draft 2.

I go by the same name on fanfiction JJSlay and draft 1 is there, chapter 2 should come out some time next week at the latest.

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Your Human in Zootopia concept kinda remind me of this Zootopia comic that I found a while back:

And here a link to the Tumblr page where I found it link.

5786998 Why have THAT not yet ben a consept of a HiZ fic?

5786998 Haha, that's pretty great actually. I might write a one-shot off that now :p

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I can kinda see it being similar to the old Howard the Duck movie except it starring a human in a universe full of anthropomorphic animals it's kinda makes you wonder who would be the love interest of the human.

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That's the problem I'm running into with planning out my current story... I want to include a love interest for the human, but can I do it without making it seem like a furry fetish/ fetish fuel? I want the story to be able to be enjoyed by everyone :/