The Magic of the Flutter Ponies is my story. I'm going to start the point of this group off by offering this first work of mine.

I know most of the down votes are for the Generation 1 content. I also know most people don't know what a "flutter pony" is and that most people won't read it for that reason alone. My psudo-bad guy has been poorly conceptualized. Spike didn't go into the forest with them.

To fix the problem of the bad guy, I'm making her more violent and basing her behavior on Alzheimer's Disease. Not just being an immortal recluse.

As for Spike I think if I have him secretly follow after having been told not to come, that should work with the cannon personality he has at the point just after Twilight Sparkle's transformation to an alicorn.