As you know this thread is my list of rules for this site. Enough violations of these and you will be kicked out.

1) Constructive criticism ONLY. Meaning you must temper what you have found wrong.

2) All critiques must be able to be supported by something.
Use examples.

3) If you are told that you have gone too far, an apology is expected.
Some ponies don't know when they have gone too far.

4) Only give a critique when the author asks for it. That is why we are here, to ask for help.

5) No talking behind some pony's back. If you don't it happening to you then don't do it yourself.

6) Only the Author can start a thread criticizing a story.

7) The author is also the pony to say when the comments have gone too far.
Follow these and we can all be happy, feel free to post what you want.