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Well, not as bad as I though it would be...quite frankily, that´s Bucky being neurotic and a little silly, IMHO...
And Berry being the pilar of stability again. I love her.
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Bucky does have a point though. We can discuss it more when the chapter posts.. don't want to spoiler anything.
Just saw your note on the commas. I'm sure my English prof. would like less commas, but I personally don't find them obtrusive here. Your writing still flows, and has voice to it, which is more important imo