So my GF has kind of been pushing me to change elements for one of the original ideas I had for one of my stories and make a whole new story out of it. I'm not too sure if anyone would even like it or not so was hoping to get some feedback about the ideas for it. Please if you are interested in checking out the ideas behind the story and let me know what you think, visit this link and let me know what you think, thanks

https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/464231/possible-new-sunset-twilight-sparkle-story