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"He's the only one in freaky love with his half sister." Quill stated.

3103494 "Hey, that didn't stop the Egyptians now did it!?"
Don't worry about it though, it won't hurt much.
Tentacles started to try and grab the two.

3103507
"I know nothing about Egypt, besides I was there!" Quill exclaimed, running from the tentacles.

3103511 "Back in Egyptian times," Jack yelled, running from the tentacles. "It was actually legal for a man to marry their sister!"

3103522
Quill stopped and looked at him, "I guess that's a lot like in pirate time, only a bit different." she thought about that as a tentacle grabbed her leg. "Ahhh!"

3103529 "Let her go!" Jack yelled, using the sword to chop the tentacle off Quill's leg.

3103537
More tentacles came and grabbed her again, pulling her back, "stop!" she yelled, trying to use her hook to hold onto the ground, which didn't do anything as she was pulled out of sight.

3103547 "I'll save you Quill!" Jack shouted. "I need to find the others and quick!" Jack keeps running, hoping to escape.

3103556 ((I have an amazing thing for Quill to be for when the others get back. I gtg for a bit.))

3103556
3103563 ((I just finished and I'm ready to join again.))

3103684
3103556 ((Alright, well Jack needs to get to you.))

3103702 ((Jacks still offline.))

3103702 ((I got an Idea...))

Thunder's Tardis phased back into reality, and thunder exited the Tardis, coughing as smoke exited with him. "Ok, that really needs to stop happening..." He looked around for Jack and Quill, but they werent there. "JACK?! QUILL!?" He yelled out.

3103742 3103556 ((I guess we can continue a bit.))
"Ay." A gruff voice said from nowhere.

3103751 "Who are you? What have you done to my sister!?"

3103753
"I thought it would be fun to make her an actual pirate." The intelligence said.

Quill flew into view, her pirate outfit fitting perfectly and a sword in each both forhooves, even though one was nothing more then a hook, her cutie mark a scull and crossbones, and her peg leg snugly together to her foot, "Stay way from ma treasure!" she screamed.

3103763 "Quill..." Thunder said. "Intelligence, you just proved to me that you are the stupidest thing in the Multiverse, because if there is one thing that you never do." he extended his wings and blew fire, "Its mess with my family. I will make you suffer, and by the end, you will be begging me for death."

3103772
"Would love to see you try." He said.

"Yer tresspassin on Two Heart Demon's land! Ya be in fer a worl a pirate pain!" Quill yelled, flying at him with both swords, She flew over him and slashed one of them at his ear, cutting part of it off, before she went back into the sky, "Retreat for ya git ah wors stabbing!" she yelled.

3103794 "GAH!" Thunder screamed in pain, before snarling and conjuring 2 swords and holding each in his Magical grip. He flew up to Quills height.

Quill, please tell me your still in there.

3103806
"Ay know not how ya be in ma mind, but ya will no win! Ay be tha bes pirate of ma time!" Quill yelled, slashing an X on Thunders chest before flying away from him.

3103814 "GAH!" He yelled in pain again, falling slightly, before catching himself. He flew towards Quill and slashed at her head with his stun swords.

3103821
Quill ducked and went under him, slashing at his stomach so it had her initials on them, but didn't bleed.

The intelligence laughed, "You see, I learned from my mistakes. I locked her up good and tight this time. She was so weak after all from regenerating and healing you that it was relatively easy to lock her deeper then I had any of you."

3103830 "You forgot one thing Stupid." Thunder yelled at the Intelligence.

3103837
"And what exactly is that?" He asked.

Quill flew upside down and slashed at Thunders back, before retreating again a few feet away.

3103845 "I am a Dragon." Thunder smirked and yelled "FUS RO DAH!!!!!!" Quill was blasted backwards into a wall, where she was K.O'ed.

That also means, Stupid, that I am immune to mind control, my scales are Nigh impenetrable, and My magic is increased to above Alicorn Level.

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"That is a consideration." he said, as electricity coursed through Quills body enough to shock her back to consciousness, "But I can shock her awake any time I wish." he said.

Quill stood up and shook her head, before she frowned angrily and flew back into the air, "Ya resortin ta tricks is admirabl bu ah will win in tha end, always do." she growled.

3103881 "Well then, if that didnt work, then lets try this shout, GOL, HAH, DOV!"(Bend Will) GET OUT OF QUILL'S MIND YOU BASTARD!!!!!!

3103908
"Im not in her mind though." The intelligence said smugly.

Quill paused in midair and stared off into space Hmm quills sleepy voice though, before she shook her head and growled, flying at Thunder quickly.

"MUL QAH DIIV"(dragon aspect) Draconic armor appeared on Thunder's body

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Quill slashes her swords at Thunder, but doesn't even scratch the armor, she growled, "Ya cheatin, all fin ah way ta get ya!" she flew upwards.

3103922 "Kaan Drem ov!!" (kynes peace.) "Please calm down!!" Thunder shouted at his sister.

"ZUN HAAL VIIK"(Disarm)

3103984 ((How long do those things last?))
Quill stops flying up and stops, her hold on the swords failing as she let her hooves drop to her sides, her swords falling to the ground and planting themselves in the ground.

"Hmmm...I will have to fix that problem." The intelligence said.

3103994 ((Don't know exactly, anywhere from an hour to a day I believe.))

Thunder saw his opprotunity and rushed towards his sister, banishing the G.I. influence from her, and making sure that it would never happen again.

3104003
Quill went limp and started falling.

"You forget that I told you I locked her far in her mind, it will take quite a lot for her to get back to control." The intelligence said. "That and your silly shouts did it as well."

3104008 "I'll just have to enter it then and find her." Thunder concentrated and entered his sisters mind.

Thunder reappeared inside Quill's Mind.

3104013
A giant fly trap forest greets him, and all of them turn to look at him.

3104018 'I cant hurt anything, for risk of hurting quill' Thunder thought to himself. "MUL QAH DIIV" thunder's Draconic armor reappeared and he walked through the fly trap forest, nothing able to hurt him or eat him

"QUILL!!!! WHERE ARE YOU!?"

3104013 Jack managed to dodge the tentacles. He than senses strong energy, and follows it.

3104031
Quill screamed and when he ran to look for her, he saw a fly traps trying to eat her, but she wasn't how she looked now, she was her old unicorn self. A fly trap bit down on her stomach and she screamed, before punching it and running towards where Thunder was, and passed through him, regeneration angry around her, "No, no regenerating, I refuse to do that now." she growled, bleeding badly as she ran into her TARDIS.

3104048 "I'M COMING QUILL!!!!!!!" Thunder ran towards his sister.

3104043 ((You just missed an awesome pirate thing))

3104053
The scenery changed and Quill was standing at her controls, a brown unicorn pony mare behind her. "So then we go there and finish up, and I will bring you home." Quill said smiling.
"I don't want to go though!" the mare exclaimed.

"Its too dangerous already! I cant let you be with me anymore, I'm thinking of you." Quill said quietly.

"Your thinking of yourself! You don't want me to see all the amazing things out there!" The mare yelled, when quill turned around to argue, the mare slashed at her with her horn and cut a deep cut into her chest, before the TARDIS landed and she ran out.

"Let's see. Where is the energy coming from?"

3104080 "QUILL!!" Thunder ran up to his sister. "are you ok?"

((I'm gonna need to take a break at 1 for about 2 hours.))

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Quill didn't see him and instead turned back to her controls, ignoring the bleeding, "Ill fix that later, I just need to leave her there, she wouldn't listen to me." she sighed, "That hasn't happened before." she muttered leaving the place behind.

The scene changed again to being under water.

3104108 Quill, can you hear me?