There's so much to to praise, but I gotta get the negativity out of the way first. Grammar was a tad choppy, and pacing was alright. Not perfect, but definitely not bad. Just their relationship and thoughts kinda seem to shift really fast, but it's not really a bad thing.
Now, this story is terrific. I love the ship, characterization is flawless, dialogue feels real, and it's got feels. Having been in situations like Braeburn is, I can personally attest to the perfection of this.
Everybody, read this! It's got a long way before completion, but it's totally worth a favourite.
Here's the story by Thrawn1800.
Alrighty, so I've been away for awhile, but I'm back! I decided to kick things off by reviewing a slightly unusual ship.
Here's the gist: Braeburn and Soarin both battle with internal doubts about their feelings for each other, and romance develops.
We don't see enough m/m shipping if you ask me. Especially those of high quality.
This story is high quality.
Mood: Emotional
Grammar: occasional misplaced adjectives or spelling errors. 4/5
Style: Realistic
There's so much to to praise, but I gotta get the negativity out of the way first. Grammar was a tad choppy, and pacing was alright. Not perfect, but definitely not bad. Just their relationship and thoughts kinda seem to shift really fast, but it's not really a bad thing.
Now, this story is terrific. I love the ship, characterization is flawless, dialogue feels real, and it's got feels. Having been in situations like Braeburn is, I can personally attest to the perfection of this.
Everybody, read this! It's got a long way before completion, but it's totally worth a favourite.
Final Verdict: 9/10