Talk about a mouthful!
Story
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Mood
This story concerns the travels of Pokey Pierce and Pinkie Pie as they travel through the scariest cave in Equestria.
They shoot cakes at monsters and (around the end) some romance happens.
This basically crosses over with two different games, as far as I was concerned.
I really can't say a ton.

5/5 for Random tag fulfillment

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Style
The writing was smooth, I could follow what was going on, No complaints.even if I didn't understand any of it.
Dialogue was well done. No problems there.

5/5 For Writing

Grammar
Some missed things, but then again, this isn't the grammar nazi group.
4/5 for grammar

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Enjoyable. Earns a like.

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I'll fix up some of the grammar mistakes later, but I'm glad it was enjoyable.