Hey guys. For those of you don't know me, I'm just a humble little writer that has been on this site for a fair few years, and have been working rather hard to write a rather large crossover story for nearly 3 years now. With 34 chapters done, part 4 of the story coming to a close, and roughly 20 more chapters left to go, I still require critique and criticism to keep me on my toes. Without further to do, here is my story:

Elements Change the Dark Hearts

A story of 6 monsters coming to Equestria, experiencing it's VERY different atmosphere than what they previously endured, and perhaps changing for the better (or, at least getting on a path of redemption). There's some action, some adventuring, and I try my best to bring in some comedy and drama to the table too.

For those that read it, I truly hope you enjoy it. If you don't like it, and think it's the worst thing since stepping on a turd, please tell me before you dislike it, and tell me why so I can adjust accordingly (within reason, of course)

Thank you very much.