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Viking Hoof
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2962095 maybe... no they wouldn't exchange phone numbers, they are new and Ponyville is too small. What would Red see in Scribble?


2962204 do you mean your zombie story? Also, which Vinland Verse? There are 3 developed ones, Prime, Cyrinian, and now Equestrian. Cyrinian is one I've never shown you, but it's mid to late medieval, without any of the sci-fi or Fantasy elements of The P or E verses. In it Vinland is one of the major duchies/Jarldoms of a nation named Cyrinia, it's on a smaller scale. The Prime is any of the Sci-Fi stories that have the immortal princessa/Prince, and space battles. Equissian Vinland is the one you've read in My little Human Princess.

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I was just saying that as an example... They could meet by accident and just get to know each other that way?

No, not my zombie story, something else I might have shown you once or twice before, but it would involve the Prime, since it involves another planet.

2962312
Umm... Vikinga, I'm getting my computer taken away for a while, and I don't know if or when I'll be getting it back. I'll try to keep in touch when I'm at school and stuff, but for a while at least communication is gonna be severely limited.

I'm really sorry... *kisses you gently then leaves*

Viking Hoof
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2963228 what ?! Fade! I'll miss you!

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This'll probably be the last time I can talk to you for at least a couple days... I'm really sorry Vikinga. I guess my failing grades finally caught up with me, not that I could really do anything about it... I'll miss you Vikinga, I-I love you :fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry:

Viking Hoof
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2968274 FADE! After this I'm helping you with your homework, no saying no!

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V-Vikinga...

Viking Hoof
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2968565 fade, you aren't giving me a no on this. I'm helping you with your homework.

Viking Hoof
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2968565 DCMC Is marked as completed. I'm continuing the story in a sequel. This is the first draft of the first chapter.

My life was pure bliss. I had just learned that I might finally be able to fly, Twilight Sparkle, daughter of Celestia, just told me she was engaged to my mom, and there was prospects of pizza. Pure Freaking Bliss, Euphoria, Joy, Ecstasy!

Admittedly, my life still wasn't perfect. My first friend ever hadn't seen me since the day we met, Highschool would still be filled with ponies two or more years older than me, and I still was mute. These just seemed insignificant compared to the pure unfiltered awesome in my life! Unfiltered awesomeness that had overwhelmed my small body.

Which is why I had just fainted.

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I awoke slowly, cheerfully. One side of me was cold, while the other was warm. The warm side, I eventually figured out it was my right, dominated my cold side, but this definetly wasn't my bed. Interesting.

I raised my head slowly, feeling a warm coat brush against my cheek. Surprised, I opened my eyes. I saw lavender. Warm furry lavender that filled the right side of my vision. Turning that way, I saw Twilight.

Oh... Yeah. Twilight was trying to marry my mom! All my silly attempts to hook them up were a tad late... but wait. Twilight said the reason they mom had said yes, but not yet, was because she was worried about me. My actions would have helped there! Knowing this pride swelled in my heart.

The reason my left side was cold was because we were in a moving chariot. It was the same one that had taken us to Cloudsdale, where I had learned I would probably be able to fly. It was an exciting idea, especially after 14 years of waiting. I had done a lot in that time, skipped two grades, been bullied, conversed with a goddess of imagination, inspiration, and insanity. Her name was Fantasi, she liked the color of my mane.

Flying with my own wings after all this time... I had already accepted it as reality, even as unbelievable as it was. I was going to be able to fly... I'd have to learn how to fly. I didn't know any Pegasi in Ponyville besides Derpy.

Derpy... I had only seen her once. Maybe she didn't think of me as a friend anymore? I had just missed two days of school. She wasn't really my first friend. She was just the first one that hadn't been using me since day one. For all know she could try to take me down a peg in front if everyone the day I got back to school. That would make her the third "friend" to so. They did it that way, because it made me cry which gave them a boost in popularity.

Speaking of popularity, what would the other thousand or so members of the Twilight Fanclub do to me when the found out Twilight was going to be my stepmom?!

Was going to be... that was assuming her attempts to convince mom that I was ready for them to be married didn't mess up their relationship somehow. Mom had said to ask again in one year, Twilight trying to move that date foward by 361 days might upset mom, but I didn't see that happening. Her two stated concerns prooved to be positives she probably hadn't even considered possible. My super late bloom wing wise would be a huge relief to her, even with my premature sexual maturing. Combine that with my attempts to show complete support for their relationship, and the fact that she trusted a Twilight to take me to the hospital, showed that me and her got along fine!

All of this was assuming that those were her real concerns. Mom could have lied about why she wanted to wait. If that was true then my actions wouldn't have changed much, or did it? If her real reason was different, then I didn't know what I had changedZ

Twilight nudged me back. I realize my mind had been going faster than usual. She looked concerned for me, which was understandable after the way I had fainted. There was more though. She was truly nervous. Understanding hit me like a coal powered freight train, and immediately siezed the oppurtunity to nuzzle against her cheek comfortingly. I probably looked sickingly cute, blegh, but Twilight was worried about mom.

In four days Twilight had earned my trust. It was awe inspiring seeing a element of Harmony and adopted royalty at work. No one besides Mom had ever held my trust like this. Mom would be a fool not to marry this mare, and I was going to be sure she didn't make that mistake.

Twilight smiled as wide as Pinkie Pie did in my rare, Elements of Harmony RPG card game. She nuzzled back, and started giggling.

The another fans would kill me for sure.

-=-

Twilight and didn't speak much on the way home, but the time passed quickly as I silently built up Twilight's confidence. She would need every ounce of courage to reask my mom to marry her, even if mom had said yes the first time. She had to succeed! Mom would regret letting her go, and she regretted to much already. For her sake I acted as cute and as cuddly as can be for Twilight.

When the chariot finally landed in Ponyville Twilight helped me to the ground. As she turned to her bags I ran around the chariot and gave the cab puller a big hug. Being cute might be gross, but this stallion had flown my to an appointment that turned my life around! He deserved a hug even if he had no hoof in my biological changes.

I scampered back to Twilight before he could respond, and grabbed my bag from the back. She haas noticed my little reward, and she shook her head amused.

"Come on Scribble, it's time me and your mom talked." I nodded sheepishly and followed down the stree to my home. We hadn't landed closer because the small road was populated by a few ponies, and the chariot driver hadn't wanted to risk it. Even so, it wasn't a long trip to my door.

I had lived in this house for a little over a week, and already it was more of a home than any other I had lived in. Homes were weird like that. The tension skyrocketed as Twilight knocked softly on the door. It built and built as Twilight and me waited for one, two, and then three seconds. Then mom answered the door.

She looked like a mess, but a good mess. It was the sort of mess only the ecstatic or joyous could be after crying happy tears for hours. It was easy enough to tell she had been crying in join. Her cheeks were puffy, and her eyes were red, but her eyes and lips bore true smiles.

She barreled out the door way, going from 0 to 60 in under a second and glomped me with unrestrained glee. "My baby girl is going to fly!" She shouted to the whole world and lifted me above her as she lay on her back. It was super embarrassing, but the words made me start to cry too. My inability to fly had hurt her. She felt like a failure, I think. She was dead wrong, but she had carried that stupid guilt anyway.

"Winter, can we all talk." Twilight asked as she nuzzled the both of us. It was obvious what she wanted to talk about, and the look mom gave her said the answer loud and clear.

I was getting a second mom.

Shock hit me as Twilight raised a hoof before my mom could say anything. "Winter, I have a secret I need to tell you before you say yes. I was going to tell you the first time I asked, but you beat me to my question." I felt my whole body chill. What secret could be so precious she waited till right before they got engaged for real? What had Twilight been hiding?! I knew deep in my heart Twilight was trustworthy, that this secret couldn't change my mom's heart, or else Twilight would have said it already.

But even under that was fear.

Mom looked just as shocked, but set me on the ground and headed in quietly. I followed her. In the living room was a pizza waiting. It was exactly as mom and I got back in those terrible years in Manehatten. She had remembered, and I felt comfort knowing that whatever came me and mom could survive.

Once the front door was closed, Twilight began to take deep breaths. She was preparing herself. I already knew that this secret was a biggie, but this added more tension like oil on a fire. We waited as she gathered the courage to speak, sitting on the edge of our seats, and then...

Wings...

WINGS?!

Twilight had wings! She-she! How? When? Where... WHERE HAD THOSE BEEN HIDING?!

"I'm not actually adopted." Twilight whispered nervously. "Neither is Rainbow Dash, but she refuses to learn magic." T-Twilight was an alicorn! A ALICORN! There had been dozens of theories about why she had been adopted along with Rainbow Dash, some had even turned out to be true, but NOPONY had thought that the adoption was a ruse! A ruse to hide the fact they weren't adopted!

"Y-yes." Mom stammered out. She looked just as shocked as I was, but there was a surety in her eyes. Twilight seemed confused, then stunned, then she frowned again.

"N-now for my second confession." She took a deeper breath. This secret was even bigger! What could be bigger than her being an Alicorn?! "Scribble'searlymaturityandsuddenwingdevelopementarebothmyfault!" she belted out faster than me or mom could understand. "When you told me Scribble couldn't fly and was mute, when you described your struggles, I was seized by a desire to help in any way I could. Even before we were dating. Then when you gave that mixed answer to my proposal... I spent weeks in dusty tomes, researching both defects. I discovers I couldn't fix her lack of a voice, but I found tome with a spell for her wings. I-I wasn't thinking straight! When I first met Scribble I-I remembered what you said. I cast the spell without thinking." Twilight took another deep breath. Mom and I were too stunned to talk. "W-when I discovered she was maturing sooner than expected I started scanning her, back in the hospital. I-I had fixed her wings, but I had caused her early maturity! I-I."

Mom finally raised a hoof. "Twilight... I love you, but-" twilight began to sob. "IF YOU EVER DO THAT AGAIN I WILL CLOBBER YOU, BUT MY ANSWER IS STILL YES!" Twilight and me froze and shock.

"B-but I-"

"But nothing Twilight. You gave my girl her wings. Even if you were a complete idiot, you don't understand what that means to me... I-I forgive you." Twilight was shaking, but now in relief. I just felt like a mess. This had been a emotional roller coaster, but I wasn't sure I hadn't fallen out and hit my head

My soon to be stepmom was a princess, and she cast an ancient spell on me to fix my wings and cause premature puberty.

Fantasi, I think my life is crazy enough now. You can stop.

Okay Scribble.

F-Fantasi?! But you said that-

I lied.

Ohh...

I looked back up at Twilight and mom. They were making out passionately. It was... it was... so hot.

FANTASI STOP!

That's all you Scribble! she laughed as her voice faded away.

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I wish that was even an option now...


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looks good...

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Look Vikinga, whether or not you help me isn't going to change anything. I'm always going to be a failure, no matter what.

Viking Hoof
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2993425 FADE! *tackles you* what's going on!?

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I'm failing nearly all my classes... And I'm hopelessly miserable because I can barely talk to you anymore... :fluttercry:

Viking Hoof
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3001561 fade, why can't I help?

3001577
Well, it's not like that's an option with my computer taken away... Even though I'd appreciate it over what I'm having to go through now...

3001577
I-I'm sorry Vikinga...:fluttershyouch:

Viking Hoof
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3001586 ... I'm in school to. That's why I can't respond right away.

Fade, stay strong. I'm having trouble with college and money. You aren't alone.

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*hugs tightly* I'm sorry...

Viking Hoof
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3010712 don't be sorry. Just understand that you are good as you are.

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:applecry::fluttercry:

Vikinga...

Viking Hoof
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3017984 Fade? *hugs ya*

3018868
I miss you...

3018868

The ground crunched softly as she stepped into the light and away from the ghastly shade,
revealing her frail form to all who would wish to gaze upon it. The only skin she showed was that of her thinly pointed chin up to her sharp, pale nose, the rest hidden behind cloth the grade of kings. Her lips glistened as they curled up into a soft smile. Her eyes were veiled behind the shadows of the delicate mustard colored linen as it draped down gently over her head. Her hands, which were hidden under a thin white lacing that looked as if it would disintegrate if anyone but her should touch it, were crossed peacefully together in front of her waist. She takes another step further into the light, the fabric of her dress bending and flowing in harmony with her movement and the breeze, yet nothing would phase her caring, almost benevolent smile. Not the wind that rustled against her clothing, nor the small tactful steps she made, whose movement, too, was hidden behind the vibrantly colored cloth. Not even the stars’ harsh light could form a single bead of sweat upon her pale cheeks. Her lips were pursed ever so slightly, as if giving the indication that she was about to speak, but didn’t. In truth, nothing, not even her, would dare to break the silence.

Viking Hoof
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3018876 that's really pretty. Did you write it?

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Yah... It was just an idea I had for a story... Though it needs some work.

Vikinga... I'm really afraid I won't be getting my computer back over the break, which means this might be the last time you hear from me for a while. I just want you to know, if that happens to be the case, that you mean a lot to me... And that I'm sorry for being such a let down... I don't know what's gonna happen, but I hope with all my heart I'll be able to stay with you here, even if it's just for a bit longer.

I wish the best for you Vikinga, I hope I'll get to talk to you again soon... *hugs you tightly, then walks away*

Viking Hoof
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3028067 fade, it's bucking beautiful. I'd love to see a story like this. You should write it out on paper.

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Umm... I hate to say it... But the story isn't as pretty as you might think it is. It has to do with a verse I made, this is supposed to be one of the major villains.

Viking Hoof
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3028167 ... That's even cooler! Super Ice Queen?

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She sorta like a zombie queen. I can talk about it later if you want... But now I gotta go.

Hope to see you later. *kisses your cheek softly*

Viking Hoof
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Comment posted by F4D3 deleted Mar 7th, 2014

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Vikiiiiinga! *super hug*

I managed to get my Ipod back. It isn't the best, but I can at least talk to you now... I've missed you so much.

Viking Hoof
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3038694 Fade!... I've really needed... attention...

Comment posted by Viking Hoof deleted Mar 9th, 2014

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*kisses you gently* I read your confession blog, and all I can say is that I'm incredibly proud of you. It takes a lot of courage to go out and say all that... I for one know I wouldn't be able to do it...

Hopefully, if I play my cards right , I can get back my laptop soon, too.

*Gives you another super squeeze!*

Viking Hoof
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3038694 wait no! We should talk first.

Viking Hoof
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3038965 UT turned me down, but I'm probably going to A&M Commerce, any chance you could come to Waco's HoT Comic Con tomorrow?

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Sad to hear about UT... And I don't know about coming to Waco tomorrow, not that I wouldn't want to, but my parents are busy tomorrow and I have no other way of getting there.

Viking Hoof
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3039120 darnit... Fade, do you think I could see a picture of you yet?

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I'd be willing to... But I look like crap right now, and have no way of taking a pic of myself or anything like that. Maybe in a few days, once I get a haircut and shave and hopefully get my laptop back, we could try skype chat?

Viking Hoof
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3039255 sounds great. Do you want to play a game?

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Mmm? I can't play any steam games if that's you mean. I'm having to use my Ipod, remember?

Viking Hoof
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3039255 :facehoof:Sorry, I feel really stupid.

3039443
*huggles* Its fine. We can just talk if you want.

Viking Hoof
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3039482 hmm... Want to help me write DCMA?

3039765
that'd be really difficult to do without my laptop...

Viking Hoof
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3039816 hmmmmmm... wanna do domething sexy?

3040088
Like what? *nuzzles you softly*

Viking Hoof
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3040143 mmmm... M/m human? You and me.

3040286
That sounds fine.

Guess what! I managed to get my computer back!

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